All Comments on 'Wardrobe Malfunction - Amber'

I could have done without that last bit, but I really was into it right to that point. Super hot, give us more!

what the hell was with the last bit? should of went somewhere else with the ending

Ridiculous

Would like to have had more and sooner!

You constantly switched back and forth between past and present tense, and first and second person. It might have been enjoyable otherwise but the lack of editing made it pretty much unreadable.

Excellent. Not enough stories filling this niche.

Another great story, and a good twist on your usual humiliation. However once again you haven't given it a proper ending. keep up the good work and you will produce even better work. your story ideas are good and your plots are good, and you definitely know how to write the emotional and mental sides of humiliation. Keep up the good work pet. - Amy Doe