All Comments on 'Was It Really Her Fault?'

No you weren't too hard on Jessy, but you let Nick off the hook. I gave it 5 stars but was disappointed that Nick just got away with it.

The MC sent a 15 year old off alone to spend multiple days in another city with a woman who would be a complete stranger to her. That's a shitty plan. Why couldn't the ex come stay with her parents for a while and have several meetings with her daughter during her visit? That would be much less stressful on the daughter, who was the most important part of the reunion. If the daughter subsequently wanted to go visit her mother at her home, that would be fine.

Not a very good story. He gets done for Carrie’s rape. She said no when he tied her up. He is just as much of an asshole as they are,

It stinks!!! Is that frank enough?

Not to hard on Jessy.

Not hard enough on Carrie or Nick.

Carrie should have been punished and she did.

Same for Nick, but he wasn't.

Jessy should have been punished, but maybe a tad less.

All in all a good story.

Great story. Just a little rushed. Little more detail would have been good.

Too much of a weak wimp to deal with Nick

Missing Jessie's final reaction and regrets

People do stupid things without weighing the consequences of their actions!

5

Why was there no confrontation with jessy? She gets away Scott free?

Never read a more disgustingly wimp ending!!!

I would have liked a big confrontation. Even if it was the usual platitudes.

Femdom agitprop, what a concept!

Good story nice ending

Yes, it really was her fault.

Even if she was tricked the first time. Which is debatable considering how the rest of the events played out.

She knew how much Dave didn't like Nick. Even with a few drinks in her she should have realized the message Carrie gave her sounded nothing like Dave would have said. That leads me to believe she either really wanted to and just needed the flimsiest of excuses or she had already started with them and was hoping Dave would do something with Carrie so she could come out in the open about what she was doing with Nick

If it really was a case of her being tricked why would she then proceed to carry on in secret with the couple who had so badly damaged her marriage?

Dave not confronting her at all and running off to Ireland just leaves me cold and empty. As much fun as it was when he made her squirm before she went to Nick's that morning it was pretty juvenile the way he handled things.

It would have been really simple to find a way to quickly see her bare breast and ask her about the piercing she had that matched Carrie's. There's no good explanation she could have given

I have enjoyed all the stories that I have read, this one was excellent as well. However, it seems that you haven’t written anything since 2021, which certainly is a shame. I hope you’ll be going to ride again, and I look forward to hear your stories in the future.

Weird story. Apparently Jessy was the suggestible slut. So one time with Nick in a back room, then realizing she was tricked by Carrie, and then she goes full submissive slut for Carrie and Nick. Ood story. One of the author's worst. And no way he gets a way with taking all but $500 and running off with his daughter and somehow denying custody to Jessy. Bleeech.

Based on what happened later, I don't think Jessy was really that upset. She was ready to fuck Nick already. She was playing up to her husband.

Glad to see you're still writing. You asked for feedback, so here you go. She deserved all of it. She lied, she cheated, and she had no respect for her husband. Carrie was manipulative bitch and deserved what she got. Nick deserved more revenge than he got.

Keep the stories coming.

Nick needed punishment. A smashed knee at least. It cost stars letting him get away free.

I didn't mind the story, A bit surprised Jessy took Carrie's word for her husband's change in attitude especially after he made it plain how mush he hated Nicks attention towards Jessy.

Considering how upset she was at being tricked it would have been good to know how she ended up seeing both of them regular, as it would seem she was getting it on with both Carrie and Nick from what Carrie said while tied up.

Didn't like how Nick got off free, after leaving Carrie tied up it would have been good for him to go catch Jessy and Nick and for him to get some revenge on Nick.

The setup of the story was good but I think the second half was a bit of a let down.

I wouldn't mind seeing a rewrite and change after the meeting with Carrie in the park.

I thought the story up until he went to see Carrie at her office was good and well written. However, after that it seemed rushed and lacked the quality up to that point.

I don't like it much.

I agreed that those bitches paid the price but what about the SOB Nick!

The last page is pathetically written.

These stories are just that, stories. They trigger emotions that, if written correctly, that engage the reader, or in the case of some, turn them off. If you've ever been betrayed, the emotions are those of poetic justice. Well written, and truly enjoyed it. Thank you

A tad OTT but a good story. Don't let these Anon or pro cuckold wimps get you down.

Trash

Payback was justified

A proper conclusion and proper payback for the sluts betrayal. Despite what the member of the Literotica Anonymous Cuckyboy Army posted just below me...

Nasty little BTB tale. It seems that adultery is unforgiveable but rape, torture, theft and child kidnapping are all okay.

Formulaic fodder for the misogynists that will earn the author lots of brownie points from the Literotica Taliban, but very few from me.

LA

Interesting tale of payback

A good time to read this

Excellent, they got exactly what they deserved

OK Brit Teaser. One question! Why do the wives do the nasty on Thursdays??? If an affair happens, it's on Thursdays! What have you got against this weekday?

AND! Beware of Frogs on holiday!

I've returned to your stories after a few years. This one piqued my interest before and I commented on Dave's many flaws. I had much the same feel after 4 years. Dave did not ride hers on his own behaviors nor his wife's. That made him complicit in much or the problem that befell him, especially after the dinner.

Figure he's guilty of kidnapping his child. The Mother always gets custody.

Weak dumb ass Mc. Agin , this writer gives no retribution to the slut wife,not even hard language or any hard feelings. Just smile and move on, typical crap this writer produces, she is just clueless about real world behavior.

main character is a dick weed, Nick needed his clock cleaned, altho from the way wifey couldnt stay away from him he must have been a superlative lover or and well hung, Both bitches need corporal punishment wife for cheating and demeaning her husband, carrie for being an instigating conspirator in seducing the wife, Nick needed to get a come to jesus beating. so 3* only, very unsatisfying story.

More violence against Nick would have given your story a higher rating! Sorry.

Not enough Blood, He was too nice.

All the commenters seem to agree that Nick should have been punished as much or more than the women. He was scum.

The ladies were punished but Nick should have been punished as well. He should have had a few broken bones at the very least.

The revenge on Jessy and Carrie, but he really should have thought up a little something for Nick.

"Now don't you go upsetting Nick like you did last time," - That would set me off to the point of canceling the dinner. MY wife would be saying, "I hope Nick doesn't do anything like he did last time."

"I was surprised at what you'd said Dave." - But not surprised enough to check with him, right? She KNEW how upset he got at Nick's "flirting," yet she doesn't question him supposedly saying "no holds barred?

Not excusing Nick, but it was Carrie who set up the initial session, and Jessie who went along with it.

"Was I too hard on poor Jessy?" - No. She already knew how he felt about Nick. As I said above, she should have checked with Dave herself, not just take Carrie's word for it.

"Did Carrie get what was coming to her?" - Yes. She knew EXACTLY what she was doing when enabling the initial session, then knowing that Jessy's marriage was hanging by a thread, gets her into a threesome affair. If anything, she got off easy!

Fuck the bitch's/great story

the ultimate punishment is a better life. she had it coming as she threw it all away. very good. more stories please.

Sorry Nick didn't get his but still pretty good.

Well......I'm not sure what should happen if this was the real world but he bured both bitches and the asshole should've got some kind of punishment. Still a good read. I also give you some leeway since I've followed your stories for so long.

Why let Nick off,he was the instigator of it all?.

Came here for a good wank, and though the story did start off to something of that sense. It took a very slow and ominous turn which ill be honest... Very surprised there was no murder in this story with all the emotions in it.. Well done chap! maybe literotica doesnt do your story justice, or the true audience it deserves. (two thumbs up) but after 45 mins or so of reading this, im off to a cheesy corny porny story i came for!

As I see it, Dave was the one who was cheated on. The only one who owed him respect and fidelity was Jessy, the others were involved, however didn't owe Dave anything since they were Jessy's friends not his. Jessy was entirely responsible for her actions and choices. Carrie and Jessy were the main conspirators therefore bore the most responsibility. Carrie was embarrassed at work however being who she was rebounded and made the most of the situation and being enterprising, used her attributes to come up with a much more lucrative life style than an office worker. Jessy just lost out all the way around, she paid the penalty of losing her husband, child and her lovers. All around a great little story, thanks Britease for taking the time to come up with this one.

want a whore raising his kids. And him and the new wife should have a long talk about whose side she's on

Good story, some really nice touches. Like the others, I felt Nick was let off lightly, although that mirrors real life sometimes. Thankyou for story writing.

Nick got off easy.

too bad he didn't get nick as well

Otherwise good story

Too many stories don't include both cheaters unless rape drugged etc it takes two to tango

He left Nick out of the punishment,which is a pity because he was probably the instigator.

Good story. Not great.

I haven’t been paying attention to publication dates. Ive been reading these in alphabetical order. This one seems like earlier writing, i.e. not as refined.

Still, good BTB so I give it 4-stars

The ending seemed a little rushed, we didn't get hear what happened when she found out about Carrie, and did she at least try to say sorry or stay with him. Would like a little more fight for the Daughter.

This story sure was different!

I liked Carrie's punishment.

So many writers don't dare

put a finger on the females in their stories.

I say pull on their rings, if they deserve it, lol.

I really like this story.

Thanks Britease!

Top ratings from me.

Your stories re like comedy dude at least make them a bit realistic.

Kissing and groping another woman is foreplay and definitely crossed the fidelity line. A diligent father and husband would have severed ties with swinging couple. He had his own flaws. She was just farther gone than him.

That being said. It was a nice bit of a Loving Wives genre story. You finally got around to writing the "confused communication" sub type. And it was a good one. Replete with revenge and a happy forever after ending.

The one torture you missed was not tugging Carrie's nipple ring before she left - during or after the blow job. 5*'s

Neither women were punished enough. Nick got away scott free, not really having anything invested with his own marriage. No closure at all, except for the daughter realizing her mother was not worth any effort.

Nice story and reasonable revenge against her, though the other two got off way too easily.

Thank you for writing.

As others noted Nick deserved comeuppance.... Such is life. Bad folks skate sometimes. OldBearSwitch. Thanks for writing it

He is an idiot and as much to blame as her. And unlike most of your stories there are so many holes in the plot.

At the dinner alarm bells were ringing but he ignored them - when Jessy and Nick left the room, when Cassie played up to him and when Cassie went to tell the others to slow down. He was an idiot and could and should have done something there and then.

In the divorce she would get custody and would get maintenance. There is no way he would get all their money. In fact he would probably be done for fraud for shifting the funds. That aside, if she supposedly had no money - how did she get to America then live and eat until she got the "topless" job?

It was potentially a good story but spoilt by so many holes.

Not too hard on Jesse, just too soft on Nick.

I agree that they had more punishment coming to them. Maybe even some torture. Hey, this is fiction. I can wish for anything I want. Fucking cunts. They should suffer in pain.

I'm sure it's my own cynicism shining through, but I didn't think either woman was sufficiently "punished."

Jersy got what she deserved - the others not so much though

when you are playing, only for yourself. TK U MLJ LV NV

great story glad how it all went down as they both were at fault for what happened, both women that is. his wife knew how he felt about going there that night so she should have figured it out that he really didn't say that. and then to keep going back for more really tells it all. glad he finally found someone to really live his life with keep writing as your stories are really good and interesting

I am saddened that Nick walked away from this relatively unscathed but I guess that's how life really is.

The writing is top drawer and really draws the reader into the story. At least it did me. I would have given the writing 4 or 5 stars but was so twisted by the content and betrayal, Dave's willingness to let Emily hang out with that skank at the age 15, and no real resolution for any of the bad actors that I could only manage a 3.

Does every husband in the UK turn a blind eye and run away from problems?

Absolutely....... 5 stars she got what she deserve. Divorce Lost seeing her child grow up. Lack of child affection! Self shame. If she came clean and repentant on every thing that last Thursday morning then she may have only her divorce to content with and still be part of her daughters life.

On other hand if she said no to every thing that faithful evening, she still have a loving marriage. And if hubby realize she she was tricked into it. And was able to reconcile everything à month after first incidence. All would be fine.

is simple...Apparently Not. TK U MLJ LV NV

Nope. More accurately she wasn't hard enough on herself.

If she had been hard on herself for the mix-up at the beginning then things would have ended where they did on the first page and she would have tried to actually fix her marriage.

To not only fail to actually make an attempt at fixing her marriage and then compound that with continuing to make the same mistakes; well that's bad. To further compound things by exposing a child to people this despicable... that's the offense warranting the scale of "revenge" in this tale though.

Good tale though I had to reread it to get the jist of it.

Stretch it out a bit and make the thought processes a tad clearer ....

Still, good.

Thx

Was I too hard on poor Jessy? no not in the least

...mainly I thought he should have been somewhat more straight foreward and (honestly) I sort of missed her reactions, her "falling apart" when she realized, her game was up.

Nevertheless: Yopur stories are always a bookmark! Thank you.

Frankly, as sweet as the idea of Nick kissing Jesse's cummy mouth is, I'd rather he told her he knew EXACTLY where she was going, and rip open her shirt to expose the nipple piercing.

Okay, cut her SOME slack because of Carrie's lies, but she still didn't know her husband was doing more than he should.

But giving a blow job when her HUSBAND doesn't get them? No fucking way!

A parent can take their child and move without the others permission, it happens all the time. Now if he had been divorced and the cunt had custody and he took the child it would have been as you say. Child support and alimony maybe, but if the other cunt charged him with rape he would be in jail and not able to pay. If he was not in jail he could have easily wound up okay. When my ex went off the deep end we got shared custody and the amount of alimony was less than what I give to my church. The judge must have felt he had to give her something. But I didn't have to pay long as she got remarried.

Carrie got about enough revenge. Nick got no revenge, he probably set the deal up with Carrie before the party. He should have been kicked in the balls several times and I guess that Jessy was punished enough as it worked out. Fuck her and I'm glad her daughter did not care to see her later.

I repeat, he should have divorced Jessy right away. I realize it is just a story and you did well. I am an old man and read a lot on Literotica. I liked your story. Be harder on the offending parties, male or female.

In America, he's in jail for child abduction. Jessy got full custody due to his crime, he paid both alimony and child support and rarely got to see his daughter. This is a fictional story, but only in England would something like this happen the way you wrote it. Too implausible for my liking.

Who betrayed whom? I am slightly confused here. Wasn't it he who set the ball rolling in the fist place? OK so he had help from the other woman who wanted him but then he did not wish to bring the procedure he had initiated to its rightful conclusion ...... while his wife had no such compunctions. Tempting fate....and losing. That is what I call this Just gambling and losing! Should one gamble with what one values so much? Maybe he didn't really care.

When she sucked Nick's cock after never sucking his, he should have seen the handwriting on the wall, right then.

got off lightly. The women got what they deserved.

Jess was obviously lying about the first encounter.

...although, you couldn't possibly have been too hard on "poor" Jessy and you could've been a lot harder on Carrie and still suited me. A shame about old Nick getting off virtually scott free but, at least, the story had an ending where your protaganist didn't come off as a total wimp which I consider happy.

schmid2, I think you're right melsdad is an idiot

You fool, you could have had a great time, you wanted to, but you were unable to cope with extending what you know you wanted, to your wife. What's the difference between her wanting a bit on the side, and you wanting the same?

You're an insecure person who couldn't handle the competition, you then took out your frustrations caused by your own inadequacies, on your wife.

As for those neanderthals who make violent comments about what they'd do to their wives if they ever went with someone else, they wouldn't know really, because it's highly unlikely any of those throw backs would have a wife, lol.

You did the wrong thing, you need to grow up and be more empathetic, after all, you know damn well how you felt when you were betraying your wife, therefore you should have accorded her the same understanding.

I'd be ashamed of myself if I were you.

Author - you were to easy on Jessy especially in light of the time she spent cheating on the wimp husband. No revenge on Nick - very unrealistic & major plot hole. Jessy was remotely remorseful but you did not include her POV to help the readers understand if she was truly remorseful. Overall, it would appear she was not and just another conniving slut as featured in almost all of your efforts. Carrie - unrealistic but yea, she got what was due to her. Curious why you did not have them turn into full time whores as they were destined to do anyway?

In most of your stories husband, only takes revenge on wife, what about lover? Only thing iin your story he can do is just talk with wife, even than he does not know right words to say and eventually fails. But more importantly, Characters are very poorly developed. Husbands always want to see how far a wife can go, can she really cheat but only if he can afford , divorce like do not have kids.

Now just get real, do you think if wife knows her husband knows anything about her cheating, she will still go through it, if she wanted save marriage. No woman i mean really no woman, will do so, unless she is deeply involved in with some single guy and want future with him. Please just try to be realistic, just think about real reactions, is hubby handicapped? he cant see? Does wife think he is Moron? I mean whats point in writing story like this, he did not not do anything which should tell or show us how we should face situation like that. There was no eroticism we could enjoy. Why a couple would just want to destroy some other marriage for nothing. next time Just try to explain what they really want from their actions. There is something we really want, thats why we what we do. So totally crap. Next time put little crap or Go for cucks i think that would be best thing you can write about. There is always a reason.If a husband can easily leave his wife, why would he go through with months of crap, and if he put up with crap, he would definitly fight for her, and would want to know WHY ? at least.

I had a more realistic imagination when I was 10. Britease, you are not a good writer. It is a real simple concept. You can put a sentence together ok, but your stories are poor, the behavoir is just so unrealistic that your readers just don't care about the people in your stories. When I read your crap which is meant to annoy and piss us off, all I want to do is spit in YOUR FACE.

Typical Britease story --well written but uneven in payback. Carrie got humiliated which she deserved, Nick got no consequences and Jesse got divorced and lost her child. Sad story.

60 year old George

I simply do not understand the comments of the people who hated this story. All they wanted was a boring story of "guy sees hot chick, flirts, then fucks hot chick". I thought it was amazing how the story was centered around a man who had morals and yet still ended up with some sexy dirty scenes! The moment when Jessy describes what she did when she cheated, the rough sex with Carrie strapped to the desk, the emotionally twisted blowjob...all extremely sexy moments because they were emotionally driven, with each character's actions pretty much believable according to the personalities the author had built up. This makes it seem like it could really happen which gives most guys a nice stiffy! Tell me what is unrealistic about this story other than the part where he is good friends with her parents later on, or the part where Jessy (for some reason) went into delightful detail while admitting to her husband how she had cheated??? Other than that, I dare someone to tell me what part seems unrealistic. I will put you to shame with my logic. I will explain why you are just horny guys who got disappointed that he didn't fuck Carrie on the first page! This story draws you in, teases you, shocks you, gets you hard, and then doesn't end when somebody cumms, but rather ends with the rest of the STORY.

I'd give them a better score for effort. It is just a completely stupid story. If a couple fucked over someone's marriage like that, they'd would live out the week... and since any normal, sane person knows this THEY JUST DON'T FUCKING PULL THIS CRAP. Serioulsy Britease, what is your goal... are you telling all of us that you're this much of a fucking moron?? Is this something you're proud of? I mean where is your personal pride as an author????

You've written better ones. I seldom talk about the characters because they go in whatever direction the writer takes them. However, I think this is a little unrealistic, a husband would not let things progress as they did in this story eapecially because of the child. Keep writing and the important thing is to enjoy yourself. If you enjoy and like writing that's enough. If others like your writing, that's a bonus. Thanks for your effort.

This wretched story of non communication and just plain stupid actions was a real disappointment. The standard Literotica husband doesn't like the other man so obviously the wife will jump in bed with the other guy without a thought. The husband will cast around like a dumb dope taking unbelievable revenges then be gratified with a new wife at the end of the tale. Am getting weary of reading of cheating wives and wronged husbands as if they talked about nothing serious in their lives before something bad happens.

Then if it does the only course is for the husband to run or to destroy people or things. Lazy or unimaginative writers make life too simple in their stories. This is one.

You are one selfish asshole! You had a golden opportunity to have all the fresh pussy you wanted but your were too much of a moral asshole to realize it. May you burn in Hell!

Story was good. I do agree that it seemed missing when it came to any revenge or confrontation with Nick. Jessy should have respected her husband and the husband should never have let the two go off to any other room together. Jessy should have thought about Emily when she put Nick before her family.

whores or show the guy to be a total wimp. This guy told his wife no before it started. Carrie attempted to seduce him to further the game. He was dumb enough to let it happen, you dont do that, you tell your wife no and I am leaving, she then has a chance to make a choice. Her choice was to be a whore. A shame he couldnt arrange for all three of the others to be in a house together when a gas leak occurred and the house and the assholes disappeared suddenly. NO he wasnt to hard onthe women, they planned, deceived, connived, lied, cheated and deserved their endings if not more. The cuckolder got very little punishment. So many accidents happen so that men lose their genitals. Why not help him make it happen?