All Comments on 'Wash My Back?'

Ohh god that was so hot, nothing better than fucking in the shower, made me feel like i was there!

This story broke a number of grammatical rules, particularly switching tenses and not using enough punctuation. There was also a shortage of dialogue. However, the intensity of the literally steamy shower sex more than compensates for these typical amateur mistakes. The actual penetration is an awesome scene, but it follows so much stimulation that it is almost an anti-climax (almost being the operative word here). I give it a 5.