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trite_readertrite_readerover 9 years ago
Aww c'mon man!!

The length dude... waaaaaaayy too short!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

add more to each chapter write another

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Its ok if the chapter is short as long as he keeps writing. I hate it when there is a good story but the author just suddenly stops. Dont mind the comments on length just keep writing.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
that was a nice outline

for a chapter.

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