All Comments on 'Watching a Friend's House'

If an 85 percent were an option you would have received that. I really liked it but felt that there needed to be more development between her being thrown onto the bed and her getting hot by him dropping his pants.

I think if he had played with her body more it would have been more believeable.

I noticed this is you first entry and look forward to watching you grow as an author. Thanks.

Short and sweet; I like it. Wouldn't mind a sequel.

Wonderful story. I thought it was Tristian. I hope you add another chapter or two. I can't wait to see what happens next.