by CrackedChaos
Carter got a nerve saying she should spend time away from her mate. I understand he was trying to protect Taylor. Carter was keeping secrets too. I bet Carter wouldn't be OK with his mate running off somewhere so he need to cut Damian some slack.
Damian and Taylor need to listen to each other without too much yelling.
If you where to publish this book even after you'd submitted it in its entirety on this site, I'd still purchase it. This is an excellent story, well-written, intense plot, wonderful in-depth characters and riveting! Don't change a thing! Your writing style is totally kick-ass!
I love your writing but I can't wait till the next chapter.......... and I'm still waiting
after reading this latest chapter. you have me wondering what will happen next. can't wait to read the next chapters to come.
I love all the chapters, and cannot wait for the next one. I do hope it comes soon because I would really love to read what happens next and how Damian handles Taylor being the Bridge. I am excited about this story.
I'm begging you, this is one of the most compelling short stories I've read here, and if I don't find out what happens when he gets to Taylor, I'm going to be a wreck. I mean I just spent a half hour reading about their struggle to get here and while the apex may be a long way off, I desperately need a climax moment, right here. So please, please either tell me where to pick the rest of this up on amazon or put it up here, cause I need more.
I never comment and this series has had me on the edge of my seat. Please finish it! You're an amazing writer and those sex scenes are hot!!! The story is greatly thought out. PLEASE!!!!