All Comments on 'We Need to Talk!'

Thanks for sharing.

You keep using it when you should use "to".

How do you survive a cheating wife? You meet someone better and have a great life.

but three years, that to some guts

Nice to read about a husband that has a set Not the cuckold weenies that are prevalent on this site these days

basic English . . .

Collage? College

Rewords? Rewards...

You really need an editor

and many more.

Basic story was OK though.

OK,I'm not going to go into the spelling errors other than to say there is spellcheck on most computer systems.

The story could have used more background on your main man ,his soon to be ex,his friend bob ,and the new love of his life.

more build up and why he had a P.I. follow her .Why does Bob know so much about a "getaway fund".

Was a good story but if you had more detail it would be a better read for the rest of us,,4* .please keep writing but develop the story a little more and it woul be great

The story was a good deal of fun, though one should not think too much about it!

Please get an editor!

No wallowing in angst,' selfservice reviling' or subtle points of punctuation to be found here. Story is dispensed to reader in colloquial mode ala 'Huckleberry Funn ' mode mixed with a dash of rogue Warren Buffet. I enjoyed it & thank the author.

Both have enough money, so I would have ended the story with common children. I have written some epiloge what information was about the first wife, so the story may be better. Simple Consequence story. I have to say I was wrong to write Modern Figaro Type Revenge Story is the most difficult. The Romantic Revenge Stories are least among the Revenge and Consequence stories, so it may be this subcategory is the most difficult for the Authors. This Author is new and I hope I give idea him to write a Romantic Revenge Story. I give 5 stars for assist him to try newer Unwilling Husbands Stories and sometime more Authors may be succesful to write a good Romantic Revenge Stories.

Not bad, but personally even for all that money I wouldn't stay with a wife that was disrespecting me, and cheating on me money is not everything. Anyway thanks for an entertaining story.

I really liked the story especially the way he gathered the dirt on his cheating wife and then simply waled away for good, not giving her the satisfaction to gloat and lord over her lover to him. The ending and his new wife was very definitely a fairy tale but the priviso that he asked for a pre-nup which clearly benefited his new wife was a very satisfying touch. In spite of the fairy tale ending, I gave it a 5, just very good writing that's all.

The fact that she benefitted more from it than he would was inconsequential. He needed to to it. I also liked that he had already worked out what she would say, and burned her gloating by going into exit mode immediatly, and when she questioned the lack of fight, he gave it to her with both barrels.

Pretty entertaining but I had to 3 outa 5 you because of your not proof reading after you used spill chick ( spell check) .

" What happened to in my getaway fund you ask? It's still in tack ... "

is that anything like intact ?

this was the best so far from you. it work well. i check off 5 stars ,your earlier works did not cut it for me like this one. keep growing and keep getting better.

and the use of too when to would have been enough. A good editor would have caught these things.

I liked the story, even with the speed bumps of spelling mistakes and other distractions.

but, who cares and good-bye I'm gone, TK U MLJ LV NV

I really liked that Hubby had his getaway totally prepared and quashed Sweetie's 'devastating surprise' with calm acceptance (until she HAD TO push the issue.) I would have preferred hearing more detail about misery she expected to exract from him that he was able to block or reverse. It was mostly bunched up in one fast outburst...effective, but less fun for my taste.

Biggest quibble? New Sweetie was too easy at their meeting ... Either you believe in 'Love at First Sight' or in 'Love Grows!' I don't believe in the former, so New Sweetie would do the same with any guy who sailed by and met minimal criteria (she's certainly entitled, but Hubby might have been the 43rd sailor that year!) On the other hand, she did have a fairly current S2F card (safe 2 fuck) handy ... how many women are THAT ready?

Despite some spelling issues ... 5*

A great storyline with good solid characters..

I did notice a few blips in spelling, but it didn't cause the flow of the story to be interrupted.

I liked the happy ending too.

Thanks for the read.

However, it wasn't a total waste. I think the idea of 'get away money' is a good one for any man (or woman for that matter to have). It's something I've thought of teaching the kids independently and hearing it from someone else confirms this.

Additionally, I would suggest anyone getting married photocopy their financial records before the big day so there is no dispute over exactly how much cash/assets you bring to the marriage in case you have to (ahem) leave.

Really enjoyed this story, where the husband came out ahead after being cuckolded. Have seen other somewhat similar stories, but this one was an enjoyable variant with interesting characters. Old saying: It is better to give than receive. Thanks Lakelover!

5 Stars! Dan

but if you have the geld. Wow. TK U MLJ LV NV

This was a real feel

good story with the truth as the last sentence says. Five stars .

Or he'd have been fucked. Real enjoyable as a feel good yarn, thanks for writing.

Not a bad story, but an editor would've made it infinitely more readable!

No need to wait three years to build up a fund and waste your life with a cheater! Just divorce her, and then go to work for Bob full time. Problem solved, less misery, less drama, more logic.

- Good,tight story with a happy ending.

- His cock may have made his decisions for him a few times but,when push came to shove he used his brain! Love these stories where the guy refers to his cock as sort of a partner with its own personality.

- I don't think he needed to offer up that pre-nup deal so easily.She might have brought it up anyway. After all,she didn't exactly earn her wealth.

Thanks for the effort.

When are you authors and writers of these stories going to learn the English language? Or at the least read over the story before submitting it? It doesn't take too long to read over the story and put the proper word in the proper place or take out the extra word that isn't needed! Oh yeah...the spelling could be improved also..Now the story had a chance to be at least a 3 and maybe a 4 if you would make those changes. It really takes away from the enjoyment of reading a story when you come across a fucked up sentence and spelling mistakes...makes me wonder if it was written by a kid or someone that just didn't pay to much attention in school!

are needed.

You forgot to add the bit where he found a magic lamp with a genie living inside.

Rushed,poorly written and utter bollocks

illiterate cuck shit.

Dumbest Story Ever Written

You fucking cuckold. 1*

1*

An English speaker would be good.

Crap story, shitty writing.

Your story made sense to me. He got out of a bad marriage his buddy helped him get financially ready. Then without looking which is normally the case a good person came out of no were! Anonymous If you don’t knock the writer or your shortness of being able to read a decent story. If you can’t understand what’s in front of you save it so others don’t have to see how much you don’t know.

so before writing anything else learn how to spell! Then I might be able to give you more than a 2.

His last tale was published in 2012 so I don't think he's worried about spelling.

Nice passive tale of separation and divorce. We don't know how the cheating wife was except her lover was sent to prison but our hero recovered nicely and now has a great life of love and happiness. It's gets no better.

Five Stars

I thought that I would try a second story to see if it was any better. Nope.

What a lucky guy he was to get rid of his first wife. So did I, but I never found a Carol! Screw sentence structure and spelling. I don't think you or anybody else could have written it better! Thanks!

and couple should figure them out before it becomes way too late, TK U MLJ LV NV

He stays with the cheating wife for 3 years, so that he can work overtime with his friend so he can get breaking away money. Huh, why? He wasn't going to go on the run, he was getting a divorce. He could have divorced her three years earlier, still worked with his buddy overtime while seperated and after the divorce as much as he wanted and kept all the money.

My sister started her Getaway Funds after her first marriage ended in divorce. Her second husband is very skilled in construction work. He works long hours and my sister handles the family finances. Their finances are split equally, half into their joint account and the other half hidden away. She has a tidy sum squirreled away.

Decent story

Why he keep adding on if he wouldn't accept lake house

among others, collage is spelled COLLEGE. If all else fails, Oxford college dictionary on the Internet.

This time only four stars because you still failed to tell us the logic behind the cheating wife.

38 pounds of good is worth $787,166.52. He made that part time in three years? Horseshit!

R.

there may be some room for the next love. TK U MLJ LV NV

What a load of crap, no explanation of why his wife was cheating, and 38lb of gold in 3 years, part time, get real, or not, and the new wife is loaded as well, for a story to be good there has to be at least a bit of credibility, this was just shit

I like your style of writing the comedy the punch lines it makes your sorry feels like im listening to someone in real life....keep them coming and thanks for not being a cuckold those guys are embarrassment to male spices

Sorry no story, not feasible, just a load of rubbish 2*

I hope you made it to that plane you had to catch as you wrapped this thing up. Started well but holy shit did you close this thing out fast.

Boring, same old, same old.

Too bad I didn't see "in tack" when you meant intact on the first page. I could have stopped then.

The story seems more real than most I read. It was an enjoyable reading and that's a nice thing to say. Good work!

Good quick story. I enjoyed it. But what happened to the bitch? Nosy people want to know! LOL

Again. I decided that it wasn’t all that bad.

A "collage degree" is an art degree, right? Spell check is only as good as the person using it! 3/5.

No matter how macho you try to be as a man, unless you've got a heart of stone, pain, sorrow, sadness, and misery will get to you eventually.

@Legio_Patria_Nostra

There is no-such-thing as a "collage degree;" a collage is a piece of art made by sticking various, and often, different materials such as photographs and pieces of paper or fabric on to a backing. This sort of thing you'll find at a Liberal Arts University.

I think it should have been college degree.

Good story but spelling sucked.

Very good initial plot line, but the writing .... sounds like a manual for an IKEA article. Was glad when it was over. 2*

excellent despite some spelling errors

Some unique language -- I liked it lots! 5*

To hear them say "I love you!" Would have been nice. Top off. Fuck. Fish. Marry. HEA. The story is also incomplete because of no follow-up on the bitch. She was a minor though forceful character.

The character is so grossly stupid… he leaves one slut and finds another who at the first meeting shows him her boobs and fucks him…wow…! Really can’t do anything about such characters!

4 stars. Spelling and the rush job to end it kinda killed it. Over all, a good story. DMW aka

When I read these stories, there is always some “ cat lady “ that in the comments, complains about how every ex- husband finds a richer, and better looking woman of his dreams, and lives happily ever after. I guess this story, is a good example of that. If she really would have been the caretaker, I would have bought it. If she was a waitress at the local greasy spoon, absolutely. But rich women seem to usually have a God complex. If they got the money thru a divorce, even more so. Almost all who didn’t work for it, male or female, feel like they are better than everyone else, because their parents money bought them success. A rich guy hooks up with a woman 20 years younger, and is willing to treat her like gold, to get access to her charms. A rich woman who has went through a divorce, will forever be thinking everyone is after her money, and no way would she date someone outside her social circle. I gave it a 4, but I don’t believe this would happen, in real life.

Fun story. Small point, in tact is one word, intact.

you showed her the most important fishing secret. Having the right tackle :P

Another cookie-cutter BTB. Poor cheated hubby gets divorced but winds up with the love of his life. Don't any of you people have any new ideas? You are about as original as a grain of sand on a beach.

good stuff