We Need to Talk Dave

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"The biggest building company in the region," I found myself mumbling.

"Got it in one," Mary chuckled reminding me of more unhappy times. "I've told dad that I'd conduct the initial interview. Are you free this evening?"

"I guess I could be."

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So that's how I found myself sitting there in the Anchor pub, the very same one that I'd met Mary in the first time. She was fashionably late, and I sensed her arrival by the silence that descended over the corner of the bar where I'd settled.

The sight that greeted my eyes as she approached will be engraved in my memory forever, as I tried to ignore the groans and mutters of male appreciation all around me.

"Been waiting long Dave?" Mary greeted me with.

"Worth waiting for," I replied, dry mouthed. "Did you forget your bra or something?"

"I'm out for the evening," she sang back without a care in the world. "I only ever wear a bra during the day at work."

"With a see through blouse?" I queried, blinking in disbelief, remembering our last meeting.

"Oh come on Dave. It's not completely see-through, just a bit sort of cheeky."

"I like cheeky," I sighed, watching her hard nipples trace patterns in the front of her blouse, gulping as her already very short skirt rose up to the top of her thighs as she sat down opposite me.

"Like what you see?" Mary smiled sexily, wriggling in her seat to make herself comfortable, her little pelmet of a skirt rising even higher.

"You're about to display your panties to all and sundry," I warned her, thoroughly enjoying myself.

"Not possible," she grinned wickedly. "They're strictly day-time wear as well. Do you have a problem with that?"

"None at all darling. None at all."

"Great," Mary responded, leaning over to bestow a big sloppy kiss on me, and giving who knows what sort of views to the guys sat behind her. "You're just my sort of man Dave. I think we're going to have a really exciting relationship, don't you?"

I did!

I grinned.

I nodded my agreement.

I wondered if I could handle the beautiful and daring, new young woman in my life, but I was going to do my level best to make the most of it. Either way, I just knew that I was about to have the time of my life, and I couldn't wait to get started.

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Don't forget folks, Dave's not me. I've never even met the guy. Hope you enjoyed the story though.

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AnonymousAnonymous5 days ago

Great story I loved the ins and outs and maybe's but in the end it worked out well Trouble is if you have a girl like Mary EVERYONE else wants her as well I will read all of your stories Have to give you comments as anonymous because Mr Lit will not let me join up (jaybee186)

ImNotanAnonImNotanAnon5 days ago

You have two settings.

1.) Entertaining and funny stories.

2.) Absolute flaming shite.

Sadly, this is the second one.

DukeofPaducahDukeofPaducah5 days ago

What a tangled web… I found this tale to be top shelf. The plot was engaging and agile. Dave was the most interesting character I have met in a while. I enjoyed the way he could fib his way into a jackpot and his propensity for mucking up the program was a treat. His use of the epithet ‘You stupid cow!’ was my favorite. I suspect he has a tiger by the tail with Mary. I’d bet it won’t be a dull ride.

I’m reluctant to try to correct English grammar, especially to it’s proprietors, but I’ve seen this a couple of times now. I was taught that when comparing plural subjects, one should limit use of ‘between’ to no more than two; more than that, ‘among’ is correct. Nitpicking, I know, but a peeve for me. It sounds smoother to me. Smoove and toight, bruv.’ Matches your style.

oldtwitoldtwitabout 1 month ago

Not as but not anything special so far, I see a part 2 is here as well.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This had its moments but other times was muddled. How does he end up severe trauma to the back of the head and it is from "falling"? Wouldn't thr piloted at least investigate after he woke up? Why if Gwen is singing praises of the MC's prowess in his bed, does she keep on f$cling Mike, who, while she is attracted to and he is a player, he almost certainly isn't as good (cf. Mary)? And why if you plan to have revenge sex for a group of husband's who cheated on you, do you pick a swap of those husbands? I guess two of them already were in a long affair. So that is a wash. But wouldn't Jilly be pissed off that her lover and husband were f$cking someone else? Wouldn't she want to try someone new? I get why the execrable bitch Gwen would do it once, but why keep doing it? Even to the point thar Mike nearly and in his skull before he discovered her and she refused to then go see her husband all that much in the hospital? What she got a case of limerence over Mike, doing all sorts of dirty things, with a guy that yes she had the hots for and wanted to f$ck in a revenge f$ck, but then when her husband got left out of the weird swapping mess because of Mary's cold feet, well she just keeps on screwing Mike, even though she raved about the MC to the other wives before? Seriously, she is execrable. Mike cold cocked her husband, out him in serious danger in the hospital and all she can think about is continuing to f$ck Mike? How is that going to play you stupid batch? And why would Kim sleep with Nick? Again that is inane. All the husbands and Mike cheated. So why the swap fof revenge? Yes it is a story but seems preposterous in real life. Even Jilly would.want revenge on both. Kim made zero sense. Mary backs out. But Gwen already did the deed with Mike and is somehow hooked? Whatever. 3.5 stars but could have been better. Not sure why people would expect the MC to not put Mike in the hospital. The asshole stole his wife, ruined his marriage, and nearly killed him.

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