All Comments on 'We Need To Talk Honey'

Wife and boy toy got just what they deserve!

One of the best flash stories n LW by a true.master.

Damn I should have given you 5 stars

Good

Covered all the bases only trade up

No whining and crying

Not a single wasted word in telling this tale! The two cheaters got what's coming to them in tons! Wham bam and you out. Game set and match! Loved it!!! VERY MUCH! 5-Stars!

LOL I just LOVED it. Great story. HaHahahahahahaha!!!!

All right take all cheaters and twist it

How did they get the locks changed on Michaels house without him knowing and also move all his belongings into Michaels house .If Debbie was going to be out all night and return to make breakfast,where would she have been,it can't have been at Michaels and how would he explain his absence to Linda.

“Not for you sunshine”. I loved that line. It kinda summed up the whole story. Good stuff, Britease.

VERY CAREFUL.....

Loved it. 5

I enjoy a good little yarn stripped down to the basics. Perfect little tale of comeuppance. Well done

...when an author takes a familiar theme and spins it differently. This was done very well here and I enjoyed it. Thank you.

Payback comes back to bite quickly. I liked it!

Why does the idiot wife always say, "I'm going to fool around, but it will all be ok." Then, a few minutes later, it's "You can't leave me! You love me."

Has anyone ever actually met an idiot wife like this? She's delusional.

Nothing like a good bitch roast, especially with a side of fried bastard. Great story!

Last BINGO! We have a Nice good old fashion Sunday afternoon BITCH BURN! Why I like it! Well what's not to like about it! We have Two burns for the price of one! Don't forget he now has 21yr old Goddess whose Daddy is a Billionaire! (What I don't understand is why Mickey Boy chased after his wife when he had a Perfect 10 at home) Thanks for sharing this Fantastic Story with us! ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!

... When people get exactly what they deserves.

Nice BTC tales.

and disqualified himself.

Short, to the point, and totally understandable. Hardly a (perhaps no...) wasted word.

This is easily a 5-star story, and I vote to make it a Classic Literotica LW STORY.

write gold or crap. Nothing in between. What's up with that?

Great story loved it

When LW is the cesspool that's it's been these last couple of days , God bless the archives !

Also , if Laurel wants to notice , look at the views yesterday's cuck centric stories generated . I'm not a Wylie Coyote Super Genius by any stretch , but buisness wise, seems that Lit would seek to encourage a few more Cheating & Consequences stories being posted here , just looking out for your bottom line you know.

Always happy to re-read my favs. Classic tale of consequences and revenge.

Another fun story enjoyed, 5 stars.

Justice.......goodness, refreshing to discover there is still some justice around.

Thanks for a great read.

This was a great short!

Always a good read from Britease.

How many wives who want to "find themselves" seem to look at the end of another man's cock!

And then get pissed off when her husband finds some new pussy!

This might be my favorite of your flash stories. The methodical destruction of each step of the cheaters plan. The constant of being one step ahead of them, and the humor throughout the entire tale. Just a joy to read.

Thank you for writing and hoping to see more stories from you. 5 stars naturally.

Charlie finds his tuna is the best, TK U MLJ LV NV

This is preposterous as well as completely entertaining. Loved the humour. Definite unreserved five stars. Masterful condensed writing. Thank you for your effort.

set, and match

what a fun story

But writing a good short yarn is nigh impossible. Apparently you do the impossible while pausing for a red light. Good show. Thanks. S.L.H.

They're like a bowl of popcorn, delicious without a lot of involvement.

Hmm. That could also describe a brief affair. Interesting.

This was a damn good short story. I really, really, loved the ending. priceless. Along with it being somewhat funny it couldn't have been any better.

The short, one-page format seems to go well with this sort of story. While I liked the Dave story, I think it could be edited to one or at most two pages and be more effective. But you've got more experience with this size than I have. My only one page tale got tossed because there was a murder in the middle of it and not enough dead prose around it to cushion the shock. Keep fooling with it and I'll watch and learn from you.

Hans

If a story has to lead to the fortunately fantastic, this is the best I have read! Too fantastic and the reader is ejected from the tale. This had the right balance of real possibility, fantasy, revenge, and hope for the future.

I like the line, "Are you confessing to me Charley that your having an affair with Linda?" Stupid cheating bitch. What did she expect? Fucking idiot.

Always a great read.

Good read and above all very funny...As usual from you...

A really good read.

Very enjoyable story.

smug smile of satisfaction on his face as he leaves Mickey and his soon to be ex to stew in their own mess. ; D

36 is not old

it isn't even middle aged yet.

LOL, a bit unrealistic, but a hell of a lot of fun!

A good way to tell if it is a good story, if you still like it the third time you read it.

Well done.

Never compromise with cheating...

This is still one of the best flash tales on Lit. Had to read it again. Never fails to make my laugh. LOL

Sweet! Sweet!, Sweet!

It seems like I have about 4 levels I title my comments with...Fair story...Good Story...Great story...Excellent story. And usually the star ratings reflect that, but I did give you 5 *'s.

It was priceless how he was prepared all along, and got the dig in on both of them. And the adulterous wife got what she wanted, "space"! LOL

Great Story. That is the type of MAN that I want to know. None of this "Why?" or "How long?" or "marriage counselor" business. She did it, so say goodbye.

How he said goodbye was fantastic. He took the wind out of both their sails with one shot. Keep writing stories like this.

Game...

Set...

&

Match.

Just delightful ! LOL

how he likes it now. TK U MLJ LV NV

So much awesome fitted into so short a story :)

Thank you Britease! Great little flash story. Point made with few wasted words. Love the no cucks here attitude. What a stupid woman or did you say "Cow?" Way too funny!!

5 big stars!!

Glad to see some Brits have big balls. Although you didn't bring a "Big Stick" you did bring along a pretty damn big cricket bat and used it very well - thank you!

In what seems to be mostly a world of cucky Brits here on Lit, Britease is a man who doesn't take any shit!

This one had me laughing my ass off, man! Great job! LOL

5 HUGE Stars!

loved it

It's great reading the stories again when you know the outcome. As the saying goes, "What's good for the goose is good for the gander."

HA

when I need cheering up - and this one worked (although I do wish the women in your tales weren't quite so dumb)

this is the kind of story, good dialog and prose, fast, to the point, in and out, that made you one of the best. go back to basics and leave the crap alone.

Not some 8 page drawn out crap.

. . . read! I do enjoy a well written vignette. This one fits the bill perfectly.

Good story, well written. Only spoiled by Irfon's inane and grammatically incorrect criticism.

I have read several of your stories lately. I have very much enjoyed the way you have presented most of them. Short and well told with a sense of humor. Hope to enjoy many more. Thank you.

Don't get me wrong. There is nothing wrong with starting off with a near impossible premise and see where the story goes. Here it's just a fun story, not to be taken seriously. I do think this is one of the impossible ones though. Men and women often cheat on their spouses, and sometimes with mutual consent. They don't, however, do it like this. They don't bring their lover to meet their spouse telling their significant other that they are going to have an affair, but that's OK he can stay around to pay the bills and as a reward he'll get sloppy seconds from time to time. No, they just cheat and hope the spouse just finds out.

I'm so happy. Always be careful when when your spouse tells you they want to "Expand their horizons." Expand your own first.

HA HA

I have read several of your stories and very much enjoy the way you present them. Short, well told and with a twist of irony in them. Great work. Hope to enjoy many more.

Muffy

For a Brit,a good story...about time one of you lot showed how good you can write.

I love the way he handle her and Mickey. Thanks fo sharing.

Perfection in retrobution

No more to say.

i have to agree, great trade. Thanks!

nice!

The perfect revenge against an unfaithful wife and her egotistical lover. They are discarded like the trash they are.

You built the story, and the twist, perfectly. Write more in your style.

and that goes for OLD DUDES. TK U MLJ LV NV

Just TERRIFIC !!! HAHAHAHA - nice one mate !

Absolutely fucking awesome -

Definately a fine read, I loved it. R.T.

Whenever another author comments on one of my stories, I like to read one or two of his stories to return the favor. I think you did me the better favor. Very enjoyable tale.

In fact read twice over years

Still love it.

I do not know what was better. The story or the comments. I laughed reading both. Great job Brit....and you sure can stir the pot. LOL Thanks for your effort. Jim

Added you to my favourites

I think the word is: sublime, but I'm not sure. At any rate, loved the story. Thank you

This one had me giggling. Bet the two lovers lived happily ever after with her part time job and his big wonderful unemployed dick. lol lol lol Thanks Brit I'll be grinning all evening. good job

Ain't paybacks a bitch? Thanks for a great little story.

Handled his Shit for Brains Wife and Her Numbskull

F_ck buddy. would have loved to seen their faces Esp. her's as she realised No More Easy Cash :-)

Gotta Love the Revenge they got on their Spouses

for their Stupidity.

Really enjoyed the way the action developed. Nice to see an intelligent husband for a change. Don't understand males who get sexual pleasure from being subservient.

The story was fun to read. Go older dudes. Someone once said that the best revenge on a cheating spouse is to live well and enjoy life. Charley is certainly getting the best revenge. Thanks for the story, really enjoyed it.

That was awesome I LOVED it.

Any woman, any age, will fuck like a mink if they find the right man and if he trains them right. Never confuse love and lust. A woman can love and marry a man and never in her life lust for him. Some women claim marriage is one of the oldest forms of prostitution to give themselves a lifestyle and home for their brood.

Guess it could be because my wife is 21 years younger and left her husband so she could date and move in with me over 15 years ago. Yes as my wife says life is to short to spend training little boys to be men, leave that to older women who cant attract real men any more.

Thanks for the story. As always your sense of humor had me chuckling away. As always waiting for another story.

Cheers.

what price stupidity? the lovers find that answer, and i would bet mikey is not going to be with her after that conversation. ex wife may get the money but the word 'hollow' may be a word she uses therafter

I rarely comment on these forums but this was a wonderfully written story. You should write more like it. Great job.

Don't normally read these type of stories, but the number of comments attracted me, and I've read some other good Britease stories

Loved it

I loved the story. I guess it goes without saying that a little rubbing of salt would go a long way!

I loved it and the title set it up, beautifully. Except, I usually don't get the "honey". It's always, "We need to talk" in that tone of voice that makes you mutter, Oh Shit, without realizing it. Good work

Sure.....a 21 year old millionaire's daughter who makes love like a mink. All else she needs is to own a liquor store. But so what? It was fun, it put a grin on my face and I enjoyed the whole thing. Well done.

need i say more