All Comments on 'Webcam Passion Erupts'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Nice story

I enjoyed your story. this sounds exactly like what I was like back in HS, without the web cams.

BradehoftBradehoftalmost 14 years ago
Morgan ?

For a highschool virgin she sounds more like a old working girl

JustForPostingJustForPostingalmost 14 years ago
Pick a tense, any tense

and stay with it. Whipping back and forth between past and present is very, very bad writing style.

UncleCharlesUncleCharlesabout 10 years ago
A Master!

What a beautiful story; one we've all experienced to some extent, but so arousing. Thanks for sharing! Keep up the good work.

chad132chad1329 months ago

this of course is every boyhood dream of any kid or man you ask.really was great

E3_SierraE3_Sierraabout 2 months ago

Develope it and see where the story goes...

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