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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Good story but....

You need a good editor. Your story line is great but it would be a much better read if someone tidied up the English.

Example:"The amount of nakedness still filling the sight of the room."

Example:"I was still trying to disseminate the sights, sounds and feelings of my first orgy."

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good

This is good, but was expecting more can't wait for the porn movie.

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