by maanmathan_playboy
look forward to your continuing the series with priya's fantasies--later a 3-some with another woman and her and akash.
please proof read your stories and keep them in the same tense, going from the story being told from an outside party then to the dude then to the lady gets rather confusing. Rather keep it in the male's perspective then continue with the women's perspective or visa versa, would possibly make for a longer more enjoyable read and series.