All Comments on 'Wedding Night Ch. 02'

by maanmathan_playboy

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
fantasies

look forward to your continuing the series with priya's fantasies--later a 3-some with another woman and her and akash.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
annoyed

please proof read your stories and keep them in the same tense, going from the story being told from an outside party then to the dude then to the lady gets rather confusing. Rather keep it in the male's perspective then continue with the women's perspective or visa versa, would possibly make for a longer more enjoyable read and series.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
usermaanmathan_playboy@maanmathan_playboy
Hi People , I am a great fan of literotica and its stories for a long time...and I felt that why not write erotica as I could dream it well...So I would love to share my fetishes through erotica stories down here...luv your comments

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Wedding Night Previous Part