All Comments on 'Weekend in Middle America'

i just love how your writing drains me!!!!

...the better it gets! I swear, you indulgence the best details and the reader is never left wanting....well, beside wanting you to write more!! :)

From beginning to end what an incredible lust filled journey. I just want to know how the rest of the weekend went.

this is quite tiltilating and arousing....

Well my pribncess you have done it again more plowing that this farmer ever imagined the shower scene was great you know how to shower the ass fucking also was good will have to try that position is it in any kuma sutra books? can't imagine how you got that sensual sexy slim server to perform (did you hand her a $100 bill? as she walked into the room?) gave you a 100 on the therm slide was mroe like a 90 with sweat pouring down be good

I'm honored to have such a talented and perverted (smile) writer edit my humble stories. Luv ya Renee!

WOW...that was soo hot!

To the very end but the image of Randy, the waitress and yourself cumming together was just too much for me! What an erotically described start to fuckfastic weekend! :-)

Peter x

As always, a very hot story. John

Is this us..hmmmm......

After reading the story, the ultimate dream of every man would be to be in the place of Randy.Even the most senile of men could not help having a raging hard on ready to go as he reads the story.

Well, now, I know. This explains all the noise coming from the room next to my room. It, also, explains why my lunch was an hour late and cold. Thanks a lot.

Actually, it is a very hot story. It sounds like you have quite the weekend. I kind of wish I was the truck driver driving next to you on your way to the hotel.

Looking forward to the next edicktion, er sorry, edition.

I really want to see what the next waitress brings.

It is real difficult to read with only one hand.

Real hot story.

The shower scene made my cock stand on end, now I just need to find the soap and a willing participant!!!

I loved this story - so very hot! A fantsatic shower scene, threesome and anal - I feel a sequel coming - please!

Great job. Very Hot!

I really enjoyed this! It's almost left me in a coma too--great job!