All Comments on 'Welcome To Our Bed, Goody-Two-Shoes'

Excellent, and sensitive handling of a delicate subject. Revealing, but minus the crudeness that might have been.

Pretty work.

Please carry on in this story with the detective following up and the story with the ring being a part of it and the downfall of A**H&&& Tony. Love the handling of a bad subject

little Carly's abused by her neanderthal lover, so she ran like hell to her sister and Jack's place; they took some fotos of her bruises and then started fucking like monkeys and then laid down next to each other, breathing heavily,,,

what's next? some marijuana and more thrillin' fucking? that's it? or are they --- "to punish that bad Tony" guy --- gonna invite a few big dicked brothas from Jack's work place, to come and join them making little bruised Carly feel better?

i mean, seriously, whta's next?, now that the needed fuckin' is done with, with two sisters (wife and sis in law) and one guy,,, or is that it? lol

Enjoyed it. Well written. Nice handling of difficult subject also.

the sensitivity and respect with which you showed each character - while it was erotic and sensual it was never the crudeness which is often here.

Nice touch talented author - with High Regard

Thus was a real great.

Please keep it up & continue.

I thought this was an excellent story about a loving couple with a great admixture of erotic sex.I also enjoyed the warm loving relationship beyween the two sisters. I lost enthusiasm for the story when loving wife, Claire, suggested that sister Carly join she and her husband for a three-way sex orgy to help her get over her former lover turned thug. The writing was erotic but the story line was too unbelievable. Loving wives don't just casually ask sisters to join them in marital bed even in Literotica.--just too farfetched.Great writing though. the Ct. Yankee

I thought it was realistaly told but the girls should have gotten the women detective part of the group and i hope you get that ass hole that beat The sisterinlaw up and keep up the great story

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Pat Murray

Good story, but it seems unfinished. Why take pictures if they arn't going to be used? Why was the ex-boyfriend not charged with assault? Sister-in-law might want to stay and make a perminate threesome? Both girls could have babies. I think there is room for two or more chapters.

At any rate, good story. Thanks, and keep writing.

JIM C

but to short. No resolution of the police/bracelet issue, the boyfriend/beating issue or the living togather as a triad issue. Needs another chapter or 2.

What did thay do to to the bastered that bet her? You sould have but that in here

You leave a very good story Un-Finished, What happened to Tony?

What about Carly,Claire,& Jack?

did they stay together or was it a one time thing to never be repeated?

This is some of the best writing I've seen on here in a while; you have certainly been added to my list of favorite auhors.

I was going to give it five but the story didn't seem finished. Like others what happened to Tony? Please do another chapter.

This was a well put together story. A follow up story about the three would be good. Well done.

The sequel, which a few of you have asked about, is called "Goody-two-shoes makes a friend" and has been on Literotica since September, 2003!

I like Alex's stories especially those involving family members and greater than twosomes. I am constantly amazed how Alex can come up with such subjects and then write such convincing tales that almost seem real. Realism and fantasy blur into eroticism in Alex's stories. I am enjoying them considerably, so I will read each one from earliest to latest. Thanks!

Grrrr. That's another story that has more to come.

A very well written first chapter. Waiting for the rest

Extremely well written and very, very hot. I am normally a "Loving Wives" reader, but I may need to explore other categories in which Alex has written. 5 stars!

Mixed in with some more threesomes, of course.

If only I could get my wife and sis-in-law in bed together... :D

5 HUGE Stars!

maybe something of the story that shows shit-head tony go down for the count. seemed like it was going there and then...meh.

http://www.literotica.com/s/goody-two-shoes-makes-a-friend

For some reason known only to the computer at Literotica the Also in this series space is empty .

either follow the link above or look at the author's profile and submissions page to find goody two shoes makes a friend, you will be glad you did.

There will be more, right???

Who said a wife would never accept another woman or sister in bed with her husband, RUBBISH. My wife brought her older sister to our bed for a week of vacation. She brought her younger sister to our bed to teach her what good sex was like, so she said. AND, she brought her best friend to our bed for a long weekend. All this in the first 10 yrs of our marriage. My wife died after 31 yrs of marriage, and her younger sister immediately moved in "to take care of me".

So yes, some thinhs do happen, albeit rarely, but my wife was a rare and wonderful person.

But want to know what became of Tony. Did he do jail time does he become Bubbas B!tch? Inquiring minds would like to know these details.

Another idiot regressive male with fucked up fantasy. Sicko. Aldo I don't buy the tag at all. You are just gross.

very good erotic story about keeping it in the family and among consenting adults, no lying or cheating.

Love it. Going to your page to look for a sequel.

If you think of this story, or the author who wrote it as "gross" then why the fuck are you reading these stories of fantasy.

What are you doing on Literotica at all?

Personally, I enjoyed the story.

It wasn't just hot, but filled with love and compassion.

And I sincerely hope to see another chapter.

Soon!

Very good but I would have preferred the story to be longer. It seems rushed. The girl has got over her beating in only a few hours. I'm off to read more of your work. Thank you.