All Comments on 'Welcome To Paradise? Ch. 02'

All those months to write the second chapter ! OMG, what am I going to do ? Can't wait that long for chapter 3.

LOVED it - as always :P

Don't tell Mom ;)

Let's hope you've started chapter 3. Not sure that 9 months is acceptable. :)

Hurry, please!

Loved it! Can't wait for more! I am way excited to see where they go together.

Now naughty girl cum for Grand-pa

Great tease and build-up. Actually has some depth to it...something sadly lacking in many stories. I'd like to see where you can take the characters.

Your two stories are a great beginning.

However it would be extremely nice if you would continue the saga.

You left us want to see how they tease each other and finely culminate with making glorious love with each other.

Ron

Come on where is part 3 and 4 and 5 ??? He needs to eat her slick little pussy and fuck the hell out of her before dinner...

Come on already malethe 3rd part already.

I wish these were flagged up so we could know there was no proper ending to them before we started reading !

Rapier

Why does this site allow people to post unfinished work? Its disgusting I wasted my time reading this with no ending and it appears there never will be one. These should be removed from the search and only on the authors page. That way people can determine if they want to waste time or not on unfinished stories. It was good but the fact its unfinished just pisses people off.