All Comments on 'Welcome to Temptation Ch. 02'

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tdelain69tdelain69over 18 years ago
HHHHHHOOOOOOOTTTTTTT

I do hope there is more to come of this adventure, especially in a town named "Tempation!.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Just.....

... great. Young love, young lovers - forbidden, but beautiful.

And not even in Temptation? Whatever's in store??

More - please!

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
HOTT

thought it was a little too bro and sis love then actually the desire to fuck the hell out of her. BUt it made me cum..

oldwayneoldwayneover 14 years ago
Five Stars!

I really enjoyed your story, cf. I hope you will take it further.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Wow

Wow!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
another wannabe writer

if you aren't going to finish the story don't start in the first place. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR AND FINISH WHAT YOU START IN A TIMELY MANNER. NOW EITHER FINISH OR DELETE ALL STORIES AND NEVER POST AGAIN IT IS CRIMINAL TO LEAVE A STORY IN THIS CONDITION.

OleguyOleguyabout 10 years ago
Nice conclusion. But !

As I have seen so often :-

"into me inch by inch"

My reference book must be wrong as it claims the Hymen is at the outer limits of the vagina.

Anonymous
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