All Comments on 'Wendy Ch. 02'

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odie121odie121over 19 years ago
this is looking very good....

...I don't like the mis-treatment of women, however, this is a story, and looking like a very good one coming... and I'm sure our dear Wendy is going to love all forms of sex!!

Nightowl21Nightowl21over 19 years ago
Sure Odie

Women just love to be tortured and raped.

As far as I am concerned the guy is sick, sick, sick!

femmepenfemmepenover 19 years ago
erotic and twisted - just the way i like it

Loved your story-line well thought out and full of fascinating sentences. Your use of words is very eloquent. The subject matter is disturbing, but as many of us writers do, we let out darkeness out in our work. Well done and thank you for sharing.

LKinkoLKinkoover 19 years ago
Great start!

The details in this story is very interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
personally speaking

i loved it!!!!!!!!!! its dark, but sexually charged! please continue!

thomas_deanthomas_deanalmost 5 years ago
The Engagement

At a time when trafficking of young women and men is a national epidemic, the author presents a traditional manner of recruiting prostitutes, buying them directly from the parents and brutally inducting them into service, although the gilded cage into which Wendy finds herself inducted is probably not typical.

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