by mjar65
you like sex that much get paid for it and leave him to find a wife instead of a parasite
This should be in another category. A Loving Wife saves everything for her husband & doesn't disrespect him like this common street trash represented in this story.
Why is there still a marriage? What if the husband figures out his wife is a slut for other men? Oh, she LOVES her family. I'm trying to be cool in my comment. I think the husband should become aware. How about a chapter three where the wife finds out her husband actually has another special someone? I would like to see her reaction. I'll stop now before I go off.
No problems with women that love to play - as long as they don´t cheat or hurt others. She is a slut. Regarding your introduction I´d say:
Reader's comment - if you can't write stories of women enjoying themselves then don't bother writing further
Self absorbed selfish bitch She loves her family? I don't think so
Yeah, gotta agree.
This whole thing is just elaborate justification for betrayal of the worst type. And the fact that the author doesn't seem to recognise this means it will not end well, if there is any reality to it at all.
It's basically elaborate selfishness to the extreme, dressed up in feminism and 'empowerment'.
Empowerment does _not_ mean emasculating and betraying those who are near and dear to you.
The author writes in the first person and so must closely relate to her character.
If the author and Wendy have behaved the same way, she is, like Wendy, the lowest of creatures, whoring around, risking everything for the sex-buzz.
Nothing happens in a vacuum, deary. The kids, hubby, a concerned neighbor, a cast off lover will sooner or later out you and it will all come tumbling down on your head.
Please don't insult the audience by declaring your love for your husband and children.
Love is not what we feel....it's what we do. The feelings are a by-product of our actions.
You don't love anything or anyone, but your own selfish gratification. You made promises and are betraying everyone for your lust.
There will be a price paid for that. Wendy cannot avoid it, she will lose everything.
The whore, like Popeye will never change.
When the husband finds out , he will have to pay child support for a whore based on how our court system is set up. He did no wrong but with no fault divorce laws . She gets away with the crime and never does any time. Meaning for a straight male this sucks.
It's the lies you tell yourself and us, the readers. You love you husband. Your family is your pride and joy and it would hurt you if they found out. I call bullshit. If you loved your husband and family you wouldn't cheat on them. But like you say; you love your freedom more. So maybe you're just comfortable with your family as opposed to "love".
that you included your husband in this episode. I know he is not living up to your standards but he still seems to be a decent man. I am glad that he at least gets some benefit from your freedom. Reading about married women that are acting single is more realistic when they at least mention their husbands in their stories. When the hubby is barely mentioned then it sounds more like an unattached woman and it ruins the tension in the story. Of course no one advises this secret activity because it is wrong but we love to read about it. Is it possible to slowly bring him around maybe give him an "unexpected" threesome with one of your girlfriends? He may even return the favor and share you occasionally with one of your boy toys.
I wonder why these annoymous people are eveen reading anything on this site, and most of the comments sound like the same guy so you need to stop bothering this woman she is finding the love sex she needsand Hubby gets what he wants as well, sounds fair.
DAMSEL Approved
my Mistress shares me with others because of my sexual needs, so i am happy and Healthy.
Anonymous on 10/2 nailed it. For a normal, straight guy...this story sucks.
100% with anon 10/02 and rabbits- she displays no regrets whatsoever, a total self-centering bitch...
Fine story -- keep writing. Please ignore the trolls who infest this site. You have talent -- keep writing!
Another retarded effort.
"Author's comment - if you can't hack stories of women enjoying themselves then don't bother reading further"
Hmm.
Women enjoying themselves is just peachy. Enjoying themselves solo, with a boyfriend (if unmarried) or with their husband, equally so.
Some woman cheating on her family isn't really about her "enjoying herself," it's more about being a faithless whore, and that may be why you're getting negative comments. In this forum, you'll always get a few people who will appreciate a tale of cheap sex regardless of the circumstances, so you better take what you can get and leave the prissy, whiny comments out of your intro, lest you invite comments...like this one!
Who paying her bills and taking care of the family while she out spreading her charm?
Oh, that's right HER HUSBAND!!!!
But I guess he dose not deserve any respect for that!!!!
This is a story about a woman without morals, no respect, no love for the man that support her and her vices...So it's a bad story...