All Comments on 'Werewolf'

this a great story, thank you

my first foray into a category i never dreamt would have any appeal for me. but your prose, lyrical, magical, had me hooked from the very first word. beautiful. by the end of it, it really didn't matter if raoul was man or beast - it was just love being made, and how wonderfully it was made! the wait was worth every torturous minute.

You’ve taken a genre, which quite frankly is difficult, and made it look easy. From Raoul’s inhuman ability to Brianna’s innocence, you’ve created characters that simply can’t be judged just from the surface alone. The reader needs to look beyond the shell and witness the humanity, the unyielding emotion and fall victim to the love that is so generously given.

Beautifully written. Who was Udolph? Why does Rauol hide away? Do they start a dynasty? ok I will behave now but you set up more questions.

An encore would be much appreciated.

More character development too plz

i loved the way you had the characters interact and the detail was awesome! this made me feel like i was a part of the story and i sure hope there will be more of Brianna an Raoul! VERY HOT! Keep up the good work!

Nothing short of brilliant! More please! Cheryl

One of the best stories I've read in a long time here.

Really enjoyed this story! It wasn't rushed, held good drscriptives of actions, needs a little more description of characters. Opens the story up for potencial for more!

I loved the detail you put into the story, from the dew on the grass to the feast they had on the table! You didn't rush into the hotter bits (which I know most ppl do) and took your time. It was a great read.

You paid great attention to detail and described everything beautifully. I couldn't help but fall in love with your characters. I have always been a big fan of werewolf stories and this is one of the best I've read. Great job and keep up the good work.

Loved it, loved it, loved it! Every word was lovely. Very artfully written.

One of the best werewolf stories that I have ever read. I hope that you will continue with the Raoul and Brianna storyline. You don't see very many good werewolf stories any more.It is even rarer to see one with a happy ending. I hope that you will continue with this story line. Wolfmann

I loved it. It is the best werewolf story I've read.

I loved this story and your writing style. Your description throughout the entire piece was excellent. This is a very well written, hot piece of work. :]

I really enjoyed this one! Can't wait to read more!

The story was so well told, that I felt like I went from reading it to seeing all take place before me. You have a great gift.. please write more stories.. I love your imagination.

i can only give u a 5/5 and a 100% but i wish the scales went higher

wow wow wow wow wow i loved this story!!! first time i've ever given a 5/5 (;

I would love to hear more from this couple. Would you please write about what happens to them after this night?

A really nice story. It could be the foundation of a deeper story. Who was his master? How did he become a werewolf? Where do they go from here?:

It was a very enjoyable story. Thanks!

different but i enjoyed it

But I think it could have continued a little longer.

...would like to read more about this couple and have a few questions answered:

was raoul turned or born, will be brianna be turned, what's raoul’s relationship with udolph and why aren’t there any women/females in the castle?

thanks for this remarkable tale ;0)

This was like utter perfection of romance and lust. If I had to score this I'd give it a 6 our of 5.

It was awesome :)

It was a great story!!! I hope you write more.

A beautiful tale

Good story,not what I expected .But well written and excellently done .I give it 5 stars .And I really enjoyed it

Do I have to say anything else?

It's really a pity that you stopped posting on this board, your writing is great!

You should most definitely continue. There is a lot of loose ends to use.

This is a wonderful story. It is a story of love, romance, and people. Entirely well done from beginning to end. The descriptions made the place, the mood, and the people come alive. Also, as an editor, I never saw one thing that distracted me from the story. I would that you would add some more. This is a story to be used as an example.

The prelude to the sex itself (start, introductions etc) took a bit of time, but when they finally had sex, all the wait was worth it. The sex part was very graphic, good job!

This is THE BEST story that I have come across on literotica. You are an amazing writer. I was swept off in the myriad hues you painted. The rusty castle, the lush emerald fields, the azure summer sky, and of course the final mating scene. The iridescence was stunning in its beauty and astounding in its luxury. Great job! Cheers and love~~

This was wonderful. I want more! -Thank you author.

Good story

Beautiful use of language and imagery.

I hope there is a part 2 because I want them to mate for life and for them to share a forever love .

Stephen J

Oh man, this was amazing! And I absolutely love your writing style!

I enjoyed this tale. Well written. A few oddly placed words but otherwise, Bravo.

Loved the story would like to read more .

Very well written tale to escape daily grind. Thanks for the imagination!

Wasn't too sure about the story when I started reading it. Seemed to be a little too much like a fairy tale. It felt like I blinked and the sword fight was over and Udolph's head was rolling down the stairs. Not much of a fight, but then it was hinted that maybe Udolph was ready to die, okay. The story telling took on a completely different tone when it came to the love making part. Seems like everything was secondary to this part. Still a decent story but it would have been nice to have a finish to it.