by Sassiwolf7
Good story. Only thing people leave out of their erewolf stories is they are canines and as such when they cum they press in as far as they can then at the base of their pens I very big and hard knot grows inside sealing they seen in the receptacle being ass or vagina and he stays stuck to you till the knot recedes.
It hurt me too much to see so many grammatical and spelling errors, I wasn't able to finish reading it halfway through.
Get someone to proofread it before you upload next time.
0/5 stars
great story, I dare to say amazing , i hope you can continue with stories about humans and werewolves
This is a great story - especially as I'm really into the gay werewolf thing.
It was very good I really hope u continue this story and I really love this story.
please continue the story dont leave it hanging
let jake and john contue make them mates and bring it to a conclution its a good beginning dont leave it hanging
In a weird kind of way, I liked the story. Yet, otherwise, it left me wondering "And, so what?" So, I felt like something was missing. I am not certain if that makes sense. But, then do feeling make sense sometimes???
It wasn't bad the first chapter made me cringe though. It should've been in nom-consensual. I find it weired they don't even talk about the rape at all. They don't even know each others name before they fuck again. It seemed like the rape didn't bother him at all especially for someone supposedly straight.
Not a bad chapter after the looooooooong wait but please get someone to read through before you post as there were many small errors that take some of the enjoyment out of reading your story! Maybe getting an editor would help with that.