by vorcla
very well done. a great set-up, including the legacy tie-in to the Universal Classic. I'm eagerly waiting for part 2
This is GREAT! Bloody, gory, sexy. You don't pull any punches. I like the idea of the tie-in to the Universal monsters, too. Can't wait to see more blood and jism fly!
Incredible! Naked babes getting fucked, and then sliced and diced! I can't wait for the next part and see the blood - and jism - start flying again!
I still have to give it a thumbs up. Man you can write! You should supply barf bags, though - it's gory!
Glad I found this. Interesting - Derek Talbot ties in to the new "Wolfman" movie coming out. Nice continuity.
ever!!!, wow incredible writing... you should really be making millions by know
your writing skills are in insane!!!
Just the way you wrote it. Hot women, big cocks, spurting semen - and then explicit gore. It would be great!
...I gave it a five, but I'll NEVER read it again! Five for the phenomenal writing. But could the author have achieved the same horror without the gore? I mean, not just the gore, but the explicit nature of the death scenes. What if those parts about the flesh being torn off living, terrified people had been insinuated instead of graphically painted out in sensory language? Vincent Price could be scary without this sort of intensity. I'm probably just a dork, though.
Still well-written and entertaining in a that-freaked-me-out-so-much-I-barfed kind of way.
OH! And the references to THE WOLFMAN (1941) with Lon Chaney, Jr. playing Larry Talbot? Most excellent. :)
I didn't even know this kind of story could be published on this site. Good story, five stars.