by Iread2relax
I love your writing style. Great characters and great tension. Please share more. Thanks
if her mate and her have mated then wouldnt that take away lionels ability to take her power?if so then why they fuck would they wait it doesnt seem to make sense
I can't wait to see how the power those two have will meld together. It should be awe-inspiring. :) Great chapter.
Lionel is so into finding everyone's weaknesses and deluding himself that his plans are foolproof, he is pretty much setting himself up for failure. He will be his own downfall.
I don't like that Tasha chick so why is Jacob bothering with her? Her racial comments were disrespectful.
Why, if this situation is so critical and so time sensitive, are they procrastinating so much? It's just crazy. This one won't mate, another won't share vital information. To many secrets when info, shared as a whole, would give everyone an easier time seeing the big picture.
Sometimes people are so unnecessarily stupid!
Yep, Lionel is a total crackpot, looney, mental, slimey, greaseball dirtbag. And more besides. Obviously, Ja'Mal and Kerri have to mate, putting an end to his evil deeds. Then Lionel will want revenge, a big fight ensues, and hopefully ends up getting killed. But who knows what is going to happen next. Oh Yes, Iread2relax does. ;) Can't wait for chapter 7. :)
Love your work but have a quick question. In the story Keri's name appears with 1 r in some spots and 2 r's in others - so just to confirm, how is it spelled? Not that it matters but I'm just curious ... LOL. Keep up the awesome work :-)
Blessed Be,
Peach
I love these stories but don't much like how they paint native Americans as evil but will read on :)
Weird inconsistencies. Lionel, a powerful, evil shaman is hanging out and accepted at a company picnic. Why is the princess, who was taken to the compound for her protection, out and about in the community? Why does Marcus keep putting off talking to Ja’mal? That should be of importance.