All Comments on 'Werewolves and Indians Ch. 08'

Good Morning, IR2R. Good read this morning. So... when are we going to find Lional's daughter? Should make a great second book to the series. :)

I'm still trying to understand why Sunnet acts like she doesn't like Jacob. She need to stop playing and go after her man. Jacob need to make his intentions known too.

Now he wants to be a dad, really. Lionel didn't think about that kid before, not buying it now. Wish he could have survived, then we'd see what kind of dad he would be. Not the best I'm guessing.

I'm sorry, this story has lost me as a reader. I have read very good chapters from you, but ch 7 and 8 were far below par. Consistency was lower, characters changed to fast without explained reasons, language editing wasn't as good (for instance I was annoyed by the many times you used 'member' in different meanings short after eachother: a finger, a penis, a packmate, a human community-member, it's confusing) and somehow it was like you gave less care to the writing and dialogue.

Still reading, still wishing for a full length book.

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