by BerriesnCream
I LOVE THE HELL OUT OF IT! I sure hope there will be more chapters. Thanks for your story.
Loved this series, it is fantastic. Please continue with it & I hope you post ch.03 soon.
Yes this story is HOT & needs to be continued. Please do so.
You write this as if you lived it. The love between brother and sister is a real turn on. I would love to be your brother and eat your hot wet pussy.
This series is phenomenal. All the little problems with it -like the dialog not being realistic and the story's continuity not being met, just makes this seem more like a low budget scrip for a porn movie.
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I fucking love it. I want more. I don't think its actually eazy to write like this. So I appreciate the effort you've put into this tale! Thank you author!
we have another usless writer that starts a series and never finishes it makes this a total waste of time. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND EITHER FINISH THIS STORY OR DELETE IT NEVER EVER LEAVE A STORY UNFINISHED DO IT RIGHT OR DON'T DO IT AT ALL
DBRS