All Comments on 'What a Deal! Ch. 03'

I'm not really enthused to read about anal, and especially not mouth to anal.

Normally I avoid wife swapping tales; nevertheless, this one worked.

It would have been better if Jack took more time getting into a dominant role with his wife, along with some coaching and help from Cindy (who had already begun to mentor Louise) -- but, hey, it's Literotica fantasyland, where lots more improbable things have happened.

Most of all it worked because there was respect -- everybody was concerned to help, and not go beyond what another was comfortable with. So it was a good chapter (and series, so far).

And orgies (at least this one).are interesting to read about.

Paul in Oklahoma

The ease at which everyone seems to have fallen into these new sexual roles is a little far fetched and unrealistic, but, hey, this is erotic literary porn so I suppose anything goes. I enjoyed reading about the encounters and especially liked how Louise wanted to take the submissive role and be used by Jack, cindy and others.