All Comments on 'What a Girl's Gotta Do'

Need a bit more to give it more than a 3.

The author has no brain, as even a grade school child knows how to write time. Its not "1000" or "10.00" but has a colon in like "10:00" so the story has to be listed as junk when such simple items a done wrong.

to the comment before me, i think the author needs an editor and constructive criticism not negative ones.....

to the author please continue i like your view point and i'm interested to see where this story goes

I smell a troll.

And for the record in Europe we write the time as 09.05 as well as with a colon. So jog on!

Just saying.

she does need to get knocked up that would be hot

If this is a quickie... I like it.

If this is to be series... I love it! GRRRReat start! More now, please yes and thank you!

If this a saga... all of the above! And much more!!

Enjoyed this. It was a quick read. Sexy

But good read. More please.

It is a good piece and i felt an exlcent point about the interracial relation ship stigma was brought up. I mean even on this site most of the story are the same cliché of relationship pair...blah blah... always big despite fact... blah blah addicted..

so what i am saying aswell your story is refressingly new and those like you who branch out more are needed