All Comments on 'What a Vacation'

Unlike many of the stories published here this one contains more than just plain raw sex. You have actually made a nice story out of it to blend in with the passion they have for each other.

Great writing. Keep it up and let's see more from you

I could easily imagine all of the sex scenes as you describe them. You have an uncanny ability to bring the reader into the bedroom with the principals involved.

Keep writing and perhaps a Chapter 2 of this one ???

Good story, but not hot!!!!!!

creepy but well written and nice plot structure if its true i hope dianne can chill out a bit and go with the flow demanding and possessive can be good at times but also destructive to a free spirit

she ruins a relationship between a brother and sister and you idiots think its wonderful. they were happy before she stuck her nose into their lives. ruined the story by taking a incest story and turning it into a lesbian story.

about faggots and dykes....nasty nasty nasty,......

Supposed to be about the love of brothers and sisters. Disappointing.