All Comments on 'What Goes Around, Comes Around'

by Obsessive_john

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Pretty sure that's NOT how vore works.

She either digests ALL of him or none of him. You could have him digested, shit out and reintegrated as a woman. I suppose. Never seen that. But you left this unfinished.

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

This is one great story. Only thing is, it ended so fast.

:(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Sorry, but this story didn't make very much sense.

DRayElliottDRayElliottover 10 years ago
Ha!

What a fitting end for a philandering prick.

arquilliusarquilliusabout 11 years ago
OMG

That was epic! A twist at the end made me surprised! The character ROB was so lifelike, and had some real feeling to him, and getting thrown into a fling with a monster that he couldn't tell what it was... was just epic. The story was awesome and made me smile at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
lol...

epic win... vagina vore...

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