All Comments on 'What Happens When You Say No'

Like this would ever happen for real! Probably Deb has been cheating and was feeling guilty so she wanted things to even out. Nice fantasy though.

That was somkin hot!

This should be in Group sex not this section and also the couple are a bunch of swingers. They all know each other and Connie and Debs are sisters. The husband is submissive litte man whose Dom is his wife. Stupid story of people doign stupid things.

Kept slamming back and forth between past and present tense, punctuation reminds me of someone writing while drunk, and the whole setup was just generally bad.

I really liked the story, and would like to read what happened the next day. I was visualizing what was going on and found that it was very erotic, having phone sex with the wife,while fucking some beautiful stranger. I think the wife wants some of that pussy too.Thanks for the story.....Rich

It is amazing how so many of these people project their own lives onto your story. Or maybe they are just trying to guess at the plot developments in the next segment.

I thought it was a good fantasy. As in "I'd love to have that happen to me."

So please write the next episode, and don't let the negative little people get you down. I enjoyed it, and thank you for it.

I've always wished there was a way to make the negative people post a link to their stories, so they could face a comparison.

I think it was great,

dunno what the haters are complaining about.

Now if only I could find a wife like that. LOL

I really liked this story; OK, maybe the tenses and punctuation could have been better - so what? I don't read stories for the grammar, only to be turned on and entertained. This did both, and I hope to see some sequels!

Nice fantasy.. But the content kinda demeans the subtitle. If he was really that faithful he would have said no despite what his wife told him to do. Grammar can always be improved. You can write a great story if the plot is watertight!

You don't have sex with anyone except the person you are in relationship with? Even if they ask you to? But I suppose people don't see this as cheatign because the wife asked him to do it. A bit like all swingers and swappers don't see that as cheatign or going outside a marriage. Oh well another swinging sex story. Ho hum.

the perfect wife AND a SuperDick!!!Pistolpackinpete

Title says it all.

in your dreams would this happen.

Deb to burst out of the closet and reveal this as a setup. Or maybe he woke up in the hospital from an accident and it had all been a dream, or maybe when he got home, she had the divorce papers ready. All in all, too good to be true, but still some nice descriptions of the sex, and I'd say you accomplished your goal of a nifty fantasy. Thanks!

For the read.

It leads to him returning the favor to his wife. Thanks for the offering.

well done

I too was waiting for Deb to come out of the closet/bathroom, etc revealing the set up.

The story ran off the road and into the same ditch as Connie's car when you inserted the wife into it with the absurd plot line and awful dialogue. 2 stars for the first 2 thirds of the story. Sorry.

Seems to me like this guy just put his own head in the noose, and now all he can do is wait for somebody to kick the trapdoor loose so he can fall. This just smells of some kind of setup. Of course I think most guys would have done just what Kevin did, and of course most guys would have paid the same price. I’m telling you, it’s a setup, don’t be a sucker.

...and nothing even remotely similar ever happened to me. An enjoyable, positive little story. Totally "feel-good". Liked it. Five stars

Talk about putting a target on your own back, this fool is crazy. This is a really silly story and the author was so embarrassed that he quit writing.

Dear Penthouse, you won’t believe . . .

Just another fantasy put to paper

Peer fantasy, well written but pure fantasy. No wife would ever condone the bedding of a strange woman.`

Give me a fuckin’ break! What a load of horse shit! (So whose 12inch big black cock is Deb fucking while she’s giving orders?!)

BAM! and then I woke up....

Loved it, though short. Sad you didn’t write more for us.

Yeah right? Not unless his wife has big plans of cuckolding him herself now thats he's had different.