All Comments on 'What He Wants Of Me Ch. 02'

What a little pissant jake is. anyone can force a less physical person into doing their will. But true DOMINATION comes from owning the person..How much more erotic it is to have Your lil one ask you to spank her because she admits to a wrong doing. he should learn that in order to really control a person he needs to own their mind..then you own them. But I do like your mind set. Keep up the good work.

I'd still wish you would get more editing done. But this time i couldnt bring myself to lower my score cause of the lacking editing. Like your stuff. As for other comments, come on its in nc section where else to place brute stuff?

Mmmmoooorrreeee!!!!

Just found your storie and I love it, I want/need more. I need to know what's going to happen with her and Jake?

Dominating and Mastering is a art. Not taking girls like this. I think writer needs to make sure he knows what he writes. Just research what you write at first. Then it will be great more than a piece of junk.