All Comments on 'What If? Ch. 04'

Well done, my friend! As a BDSMer and a Sci fi fan, I have found this series a treasure. I have always believed in the Multiverse and your story is a fine example of it. I will have to backtrack along the series to see the events that led Kitty to the BDSM lifestyle have been altered or negated with the new timeline.

I am hoping not by too much and that she does continue with it or find her way to it with a set of whole new possibilities.

Oh and one last thing. I am having difficulties picturing exactly what Kitty looks like. Is there a chapter that has her complete description?

Thank you very much for the feedback, it is always appreciated. The prior stories are Battlefield and Measure Of A Man, both of them include descriptions of Kitty Douglas, but here's a snapshot - approx 5'8", dark brown hair in a pixie cut, B cup breasts on a slim torso, tongue pierced, she'd be approx 35-25-36, so her hips are a bit wider than her bust, and her ass is best described as very spankable. Hope that helps you out.

As someone who likes both BDSM and Sci-fi, this series has been an almost perfect read for me...it would have been even better if it was longer, with more details, but then it would have turned into a novel I suppose. Keep up the good work x

A - may - zing!!! Holy cow! What a rollercoaster of a story. I know you wrote this trilogy years ago; however I just stumbled upon it, and I must say that I was blown away. Great writing; fantastic story line; heartwarming ending. An all around spectacular novella. Thank you for all of your blood, sweat and tears.

Here's to many more wonderful pieces.

Sc8