All Comments on 'What Once Was Innocent Ch. 11'

Slowly but surely this story has devolved into trash. Started out with so much promise, now the "good" guy is just an abusive twat, humiliating a young girl to show what a man he is.

You know, in all honesty, reading this story has been like a trip toward something vile and horrible. As a writer, you have oodles of talent, but you waste it writing bullshit like this? You are clearly more interested in drawing the reader out, teasing and almost never delivering what has been promised. Writers like you should never be allowed within two inches of a keyboard.