All Comments on 'What She Needs Ch. 02'

PLEASE DON'T STOP OMG !! I REALLY LIKE THE WAY YOU WRITE. IT WAS AS IF I COULD FEEL ALL THE EMOTIONS OF THE STORY THANKYOU

You hooked me with the first chapter, and set the hook firmly with this one. I can see that I'm in for an interesting ride with this story, and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Ya done good, kajira_girl, and I'll also be looking for future stories from you. Thanks.

LitID: Tyro999

are they a key to the soul of the author. TK U MLJ LV NV

You have done a marvelous job of developing the characters. I also love that you continue to tease us with the eventual coupling of David and Laura, but politely threw us a bone with the albeit brief but nasty sex with Maria. Kudos!

I am delighted by your writing. Please continue.

Nathan

...did Laura hear them?

This is a new favorite series of mine- keep em cumming!

With my neighbors' chainsaw whining in the background, readying stove wood for winter, this was a great story to get lost into! :)

-E in CT, USA

to provide well written and developed characters and story.

I eagerly await the next chapter.

I stopped reading into chapter two. Too many errors of grammar, spelling and word choice. You need an editor to smooth out the writing so readers don't have to stop and figure out what you would have written had you known better.

are you volunteering?...chuckles

I liked your writing. The main characters have depth and endearing personalities. I am looking forward to reading on!

...but one annoying detail: 'defiantly' means 'in a defiant manner' or 'challengingly', 'definitely' means 'certainly'.