All Comments on 'What To Do Now?'

Cdragon, you have a strong story teller's voice. Your characters are real. Your scene descriptions are a good balance...enough detail for us to 'see' the scene clearly, yet minimal enough for us to fill in the blanks to our own tastes. You are a welcome addition to Lit.

Now, I'm gonna whine about the story... ;)

Partial his fault? Partially? Let's try mostly. He knows she gets hypersensitive and he was not paying attention to her responses. He needs to own this better than he has. 'Partial' points for the physical care he provided, but he has left the majority of the emotional weight on her. *scowls at master* :D

I look forward to more from you.

Her obedience meant more to him than her love.