All Comments on 'Whatever Didi Wants Ch. 04'

I love you wonderfully written love story between Ted and Didi. I hope you write more chapters following them as their love progresses. Please under no circumstances bring anybody else into their bed, there are many of us readers who want the love story above all, and to many writers here kill their stories by not doing that. Thank you again for you writing and the terrific love story of Ted and Didi.

it has gotten off track. Instead of a romance, two people learning to live in the real world, coping with society, and working on their future, it has devolved into a sex manual. written by two one time wonders.

just a couple of slut perverts..........

Such a great sex.. Very intense and constant fucking is so wild...but the assfucking destroys the love and affection of the flow of the story.. PLUS!!! NEVER EVER think of having someone else join them in their passionate lovemaking.. That wud surely distract the idea of them being too in love with each in animalistic way, also in an exclusive way... The idea of sharing themselves with anyone else is not love but purely lust... But putting some instances of JEALOUSY and OVERPOSSESIVENESS would blow the mind of readers... MAKE THEM OBSESSED ALL TO THEMSELVES!!! JUST THE TWO PF THEM ALONE!!!!

Good story but pages and pages of over the top bonking.Anal is a bit too far.

Better to have concentrated on the growing love and how they dealt with Mom finding out.

My sister and I have the same story got together when I was 18 and she 19 and had the same feelings until your sex started up.We told our parents before we had any sexual contact.Mom had guessed how my sister felt about me and although upset she realised we were set for a life together.Neither of us ever had any other relationships.We even had pet names for each other as they did in your story.We were just as close as them growing up and usually sleeped in the same way as they did.Dad however went into orbit,he accused me of molesting his little girl and nearly killed me and wanted to go to the police.Sis told him if he did anything she would leave with me and they would never see us again and that no sex had taken place which was true sort of.Which sort of calmed him down.My relationship with my Dad never recovered.Mom was more accepting of it but was 'unhappy' until we had two daughters who are a credit to their mother.Dad refused to have anything to do with me or sis but loved his grandchildren.Shame but real life is never as happy as a story.We are totally devoted to each other.Never even looked at another person.Friends don't know as we wear wedding rings and she has a diamond engagement ring and eternity rings and people are so busy with their lives it's never come up.Once a close friend of my wife said 'if I did not know better I'd think you were brother and sister the way you are with each other'.We just laughed and said we are just blessed.Little I mean a lot less sex and more romance and this would be unbeatable.needs more but not porn,nor other people just how they made it work cause it's not easy and it's still illegal and that causes a lot of issues you have to get over.Good though

Was hoping for a long story of how their love grew and how mom dealt with it.But I was disappointed feel like I wasted my time.Anal completely spoils the story such as it was.just a wank for some teenager.waste of time.

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Good story, but once Zen gets to anal the story ends and the anal starts

The lead up to the siblings relationship was really well done you could almost feel their love for each other. However, the following 3 chapters were just them having sex. I know it's probably ridiculous to complain about the amount of sex in a story on a erotic story website but sometimes the sex in a story becomes overwhelming if it runs continuously through the story without a storyline break.

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I agree

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This was amazing. The story, the emotions everything. I loved it and i want, no i need more. 5 Stars from me and i need this series to continue. Amazing job man, wow!!!

Totally loved this story.

Some more adventures of Didi and Ted in college are needed to round this story.

If u ever get the time, ZenZerker, please complete it with another story arc.

5/5

This story felt good. The brother/sister aspect aside, the love and making love is over the top. As others commented, at least one more story would be the frosting on the cake.

(3/31/2021) I agree with thedayafter from 3 years ago. Great start in chapter 1. But this story had no real plot to draw you in, never mind keep you really interested. I pretty much scanned through chapters 3 and 4.

An engaging erotic love story. You can feel Didi's joy. That one should be so lucky.

Stands out over the copulatory wankfests some authors produce.