by hornewrecked
Congratulations on posting your first story; they say it gets easier from now on ;) ! A most enjoyable introduction to a new talent -- thank you and welcome. I hope this will be just the first of many, and please have five stars from me.
A very nice first outing. I like the underlying lightness and playfulness of this. I'll be watching for more from you.
Well done. There's a nice play between the characters and a plot that engages my imagination without straining credulity.