All Comments on 'What's Done in the Dark Ch. 02'

I'm completely hooked now!

This thing moved so fast it read like the cliff-notes version of an actual story. Slow it down a tad.

A good read! glad they worked things out!

He was married to the governors daughter and she paid her girl to stay away? She accepted the check, cashed or not. So she is just a paid off whore with a bastard. The child is a bastard as he has no legal father no matter who claims what. None of the women in this story have an IQ over 70 as is told in their actions and behavior. I loved the I dont need the $175,000 I have a job. And that job pays what, $ 30,000 a year? Maybe dear old Lex needs to have a DNA test done to see if he really is the dadda? After all she went into this just to fuck him once for a friend, you know just a wham bam thank you man thing. Someone so casual with sex shouldnt have to much trouble havong dozens of men be potential fathers.

This story had a great ending, but I feel that it should have a little bit more insight with Heather; before it got to the point of his marriage and the deceitfulness of his wife.

I look forward to the continuation of this story, or a twist with Jayden and her story???

THIS SHIT WAS FUCKED UP HPOE CAN U LET HER BECOME PREGANT WIT LEX CHILD EVEN THOUGHT HE SLEPT WITH HER SISTER HOW COME U DIDN'T LET JAYDEN HAVE HIS BABY INSTEAD THIS SHIT WAS STUPID, AT FIRST HES CAPTAIN SAVE A HO NOW HES IN LOVE WIT THE GIRL SISTER AND SHE HAS HIS BABY,REWRITE THIZ SHIT OVER AND GET THE PLOT RITE (PISSED OFF READER)

Need Update!