All Comments on 'What's in a Name? Ch. 02'

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Fluffy07Fluffy07almost 13 years ago
i'm hooked!

more please :):)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

A marvellous start More please pretty pleaseAFCB

NightimevisionsNightimevisionsalmost 13 years ago
Great stuff!

Got hooked, can't wait for the next one.

WerewolfEnthusiastWerewolfEnthusiastalmost 13 years ago
love it

im really loving this story so far its very intriguing you have me hook line an sinker thus far.

keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wow, that was quick

great story, just make sure you dont burn out by trying to post too often

canndcanndalmost 13 years ago

What are they? Will you tell us soon? And if Mason is 'kin' and Dominic was so willing to just kill the girl and not as upset by the horrible shape she was in, how good are they? At least Alexander wanted to help her Hmmm. Look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
GREAT!!!!

CanĀ“t wait for the next one=)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
good story but..

not to be picky, this is your story your world, but the united states isn't a continent on it's own, there's a couple other countries you share that continent with. Just to be geographically correct, wouldn't want to offend someone

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A RED Aston Martin?

you wouldnt see James Bond in one. Not the done thing old chap.

canndcanndover 12 years ago
Dominic's true colors

WOW. I went back to re-read and I forgot how Dominic was such a cold bastard. I mean, even if after all these years he saw humans to be an annoyance that are short lived, it's still cold to leave her hanging! God, let her down at least and better yet drop her off at a hospital somehow. I just hope he doesn't get with her b/c of that.

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