by Avide
im really loving this story so far its very intriguing you have me hook line an sinker thus far.
keep up the good work.
great story, just make sure you dont burn out by trying to post too often
What are they? Will you tell us soon? And if Mason is 'kin' and Dominic was so willing to just kill the girl and not as upset by the horrible shape she was in, how good are they? At least Alexander wanted to help her Hmmm. Look forward to more.
not to be picky, this is your story your world, but the united states isn't a continent on it's own, there's a couple other countries you share that continent with. Just to be geographically correct, wouldn't want to offend someone
you wouldnt see James Bond in one. Not the done thing old chap.
WOW. I went back to re-read and I forgot how Dominic was such a cold bastard. I mean, even if after all these years he saw humans to be an annoyance that are short lived, it's still cold to leave her hanging! God, let her down at least and better yet drop her off at a hospital somehow. I just hope he doesn't get with her b/c of that.