All Comments on 'What's in a Story'

"I think your methods are somewhat flawed"...what does he know? It just takes time.

I think this was a great story and will fuel some fantasies.

Like the story and the set-up, but your next one should have a better finish or explore it further.

can't wait to see if the Other Lady comes back after a week and do they do More tapes. putting them further into Submission. or do things get out of Hand and Family or Boyfriends get involved.

This story evolved into a full-length novel. To see how it turns out, purchase "Redemption for the Hypnotist" at http://www.amazon.com/dp/B005YRRCEG

Meh.