All Comments on 'Wheeling Park Ch. 04'

this sequence and had to stop to say how well-written it is and how beautifully paced. Your characters come off the page wonderfully and you have a fine ear for voices. A real treat. Ty

I've liked this from the start.

People saying "Where's the sex/incest"?

I'm glad you have let the story develop.

Please, keep it up.

I just started reading and I couldn't stop. Please hurry with the rest, it's like watching a soap opera, can't wait for tomorrow's episode.

I have been following this author since he started on here about a month ago, and what a treat. I love how he paces his work and how it is a story and not just a "wham-bam fest". I agree with another commentor... it is like a mini soap. Love it... Thanks Ameaner !!!

this beautiful story brought the realization that the discovery of the joy of same sex relationships can be equally thrilling for a woman as well as for a man. I look forward to the next episode in this well written series.

...thickened.

I think they're really nice people and at the same time like predators. Just like some vampire movies.

Thanks

When you live in rural Ontario and you want the police, you do not call the R.C.M.P. since it's the Ontario Provincial Police who patrol the beauty spots.