by SleepingLove
These Vamps!!Steal you away with no thought to the poor pets left at home!! Another great chapter!!
I really like your stories. They're realistic in the fantasy sense, and not crude (or mighty disturbing) like a few I've read after only being introduced to this site a day ago. You've updated uh... "When Darkness Calls" in like March, so I figure you're still up for writing, I've only read that one so far. It’s pretty good. I don't know about the name Light but I guess for a vamp fic that doesn't really matter. Anyways I'd love to see this updated. It's great, and not cliché filled. There's nothing worse when the main character is so up for being a vampire right away and to be whisked off in the wonderful world with her mate. Gag me. If you read this by some lucky chance, I would read it in a flash. I love online stuff like this. This comment is longer than I attended, ma bad.
This is one of my favourite story here in Literotica. You weren't rushing the story, also the characters where okay. I don't really know how to explain, how I like this story. Personally I don't know why this story isn't popular, because this story is just really good! Keep up the good work! ^_^
Oh the poor birdy, and Light lost her baby, I was almost in tears reading that. Other than that loving the story and cant wait for more!! Great story, keep up the good work!!
this is the best non-human story I have ever read... The characters are the best... But I'm sensing a sort of love triangle with a few if them...but all-in-all it is fantastic!!!! Update soon!!!!!
You're a really good writer from what I've read. I'd love more on this to read!
loving your story! please update - I really appreciate your hero. He doesn't seem like a crazy character who does whatever he wants when he wants. And your heroine seems to have a realistic reaction, I hate when characters have a reaction that seems completely unrealistic. Please update!
I liked the first chapter the best, since then the story seems to drag on - nost much happening in each chapter and with this speed we are going to read this story several years - so please, either end this or post larger chapters and more often. Otherwise I also like the characters being more human-like than vampire-like.
Please write another chapter soon. I like thi story.
HAPPY NEW YEAR 2011
Stayed up just to finish reading this :D
A few spelling errors here and there but otherwise easy to read and know whats going on for the most part. Look forward to the next update :D