All Comments on 'When Darkness Comes'

That was quite an introduction to a fine talent. Thank you for posting it for us, and please have five stars. I look forward to reading more of your excellent work!

Excellent first installment! Have you written before. You set up the scene an characters very efficiently and have me egarly waiting for more. Bravo!

An excellent first post, Fang13 (cool username). Nice job transistioning from wife/mom to submissive. Please continue to write and post.

Hot, intense, graphic, and well written. Definitely leaves me wanting more.

time to divorce this cold hearted, unfeeling, manipulative sorry excuse for a human being. He is all take and no give.

You had me then you completely lost me.

The safe word is now: all your crap in trash bags on the lawn after you leave for work next time.