All Comments on 'When Darkness Falls Pt. 1 Ch. 01'

I really enjoyed this. I loved the way you personalized the colour green, so imaginative. And I believe that elves need to feel the warmth. I am absolutely loving this and can't wait for the next installment. I have fallen in love with Jordon and want to see him find his mate.

Hot gay sex meets elven fantasy - brilliant!

this story is so creative and it is such a refreshing change of pace....

I like your style! Very entertaining, easy to read and to follow, making me want more. Good Work!

didnt like it at all sorry

It lacked passion and rauchiness its more of a story than and erotic story

Title pretty much says it all. As a fellow writer, I simply wished to assure you that your story definitely does not lack passion. At all. Eheh...

I only just found this story tonight and am thoroughly enjoying it. Reading the epilogue first has me intrigued as to how they meet, obviously Matt isn't the one for him but it will be a nice journey watching Jordan finding his mate