by MarzyDotes
That was too good to leave it at that, I want to see where this goes with them. Great chemistry and interesting story. Voted a 5 star.
I like it but you need an editor. There aren't a lot of glitches but they detract from this marvellous storyline. Keep writing.
Koollava
Kepp up the good work. Great story, hope there are more chapters!!
I really liked this story and gave it a 5, but don't understand at all the requests for more chapters. Just because a story is good doesn't mean it gets better with more length.