All Comments on 'When Friends Become Lovers'

That was too good to leave it at that, I want to see where this goes with them. Great chemistry and interesting story. Voted a 5 star.

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I like it but you need an editor. There aren't a lot of glitches but they detract from this marvellous storyline. Keep writing.

Koollava

Keep going

Kepp up the good work. Great story, hope there are more chapters!!

I really liked this story and gave it a 5, but don't understand at all the requests for more chapters. Just because a story is good doesn't mean it gets better with more length.