All Comments on 'When Susie Sucked Freddie Ch. 01'

...women will fire away at this one.Can't score it high because it's not a story and as a jerk piece it's way tame,but thanks anyway.

Hey Pete and thanks for the comment, much appreciated and from reading other stories on this site I can see it from your perspective.

I dabble in a lot of different kinds of fiction and non fiction writing and erotic stories was a new thing for me to try my hand at. This ch.01 was a kind of test the water piece that was designed to get something onto the site. Ch.02 which I hope to submit tomorrow will really set the story for the piece as a whole and is a story first and foremost.

Again thanks for reading and rating my story, I appreciate it and I hope you will check out part 2 for the real story-telling.

F