All Comments on 'Where's the Turkey Baster?'

nice story not too long and easy to read.

Trying to follow this story is like trying to drive thru Atlanta without a map!! I gave up!

Thought it was nice that the family helped the couple to get what they wanted and did it in a nice way.

Atlanta be dammed! I think this story is exceptional, LOL! Nicely written, beautiful emotional content, and--although probably not all that common in families--this beautifully illustrates "natural" insemination for a lesbian couple. Unlike other stories of yours that I've enjoyed, the writing was pretty much spot-on. If you had an editor or Beta Readers, they did a great job of helping you polish your work. Very well done and thank you for a great read...