All Comments on 'While You Were Away Ch. 01'

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TurningintoCDTurningintoCDover 11 years ago
Nice start!

You have the start of something good. Please write more chapters!!

William smythWilliam smythover 11 years ago
Carry on!!!

You can't stop now.

Not after this fine 5 star start that has us all eager to hear what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

please dont leave it there you have to write the next chapter soon .

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