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All Comments on 'Whispers in the Dark Ch. 01'

by MissLusty

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Mark2Mark2almost 19 years ago
A good beginning

I ask anyone reading this to see my own contribution(s) and vote. (look up Mark2)I love feedback. There is one problem in this story. Breast suction and nipple torture. How many breasts does she have? 2? 4? Just a simple thing really. An extra s. It made the difference between a 4 and a 5.

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uabout 19 years ago
great job girl!

can't wait to see how your story ends!

hugs and kisses...

T

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonabout 19 years ago
Great Start

Great start, I am looking forward to reading the next installment.

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