All Comments on 'White Fire: the Romance'

by Salubrith

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
i was just wondering...

is there going to be another chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
good story but

That was such a horrible way to end wat I hope was the first chapter. Thank u for sharing Mechmanas

SalubrithSalubrithalmost 14 years agoAuthor
A little explanation

This is actually fragments of quite a few chapters, which I edited into a short story specifically to put up here and hope for some feedback. There is certainly meant to be more, and I'm working on it. I hope you enjoyed what I have up here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
More please!

I'm really enjoying it! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Well written

I really hope you continue this story, at least to a favorable conclusion :)

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 14 years ago
Awkward finish to this chapter

but an excellent chapter to start this story. I'm looking forward to more.

shifter91shifter91almost 14 years ago

it feels so close to a conclusion - I hope you continue! Their story is so sweet!!

Storm113Storm113over 10 years ago
please finish this

i really enjoyed this. please continue.

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