by thewordsmith2590
Good start. I can't wait for more chapters. Keep 'em coming. Maybe a little longer, but who am I to tell an author how to write. It just seems like it is going to be a good story. I'll be waiting.
you give us chapter 2 and nothing happens come on i'm hanging by my nails here give us the rest of it!!!!!
good chapter...i agree a bit short but i am also a fan of a longer read but you are getting future chapters out pretty quickly, which is excellent...it so sucks to get into a story and have to wait months to continue to enjoy it..but we all have lifes lol...just some more than others...mine is work and reading lol..soooooooo...thanks once again for sharing this with us and keep up the good work in writing well and giving us a excellent chaps. to keep reading. respectfully fan in Texas naynay